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Post by Darth Yoda Sat Nov 29, 2008 11:14 pm

This is a black gunship used for night only. It has a lot of guns, and it ain't afraid ta use 'em! Shocked It's primary use though is for bombing. The dusk rider is the most heavily armed vehicle I've ever made!
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There's some heavy firepower
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The bomb hatch
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What comes out of it
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The bombs that come out of what comes out of the gunship. Razz
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Off their racks...
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Who mans it? These guys!
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Please keep note that this was made from scratch, and I don't have that many good gunship pieces... thanks.
Enjoy! Smile
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Post by Comrade Faie Sat Nov 29, 2008 11:21 pm

Looks pretty good but this barely took you any time. The slopes sort of make it look like a "rock" in the front. Fordo Yo!
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Post by Thunder-blade Sat Nov 29, 2008 11:23 pm

Not bad...

The back is too boxy and plain, maybe add a door or hatch of some sort?

The wings are also plain... maybe a streak of dark bley?

Guns look great! This thing would be terrifying on the battlefield!

As I said in the WIP topic, ditch the cockpit, use the other kind that was used in the original Gunship set.
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Post by Darth Yoda Sat Nov 29, 2008 11:23 pm

Commander Faie wrote:Looks pretty good but this barely took you any time. The slopes sort of make it look like a "rock" in the front. Fordo Yo!

It actually took me about 5 hours in all.... which is a medium amount. Smile
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Post by Alpha Sat Nov 29, 2008 11:25 pm

Yeah. Use 1x2 Slopes on the side, just to balance it out. The front kinda looks like a rock. (As CFaie said. Razz )

Overall it looks good. Just needs some straightening out here and there.

Also, make the missiles thin and sleek, and 1 shape. Unless they're bombs...
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Post by Clonecommando007 Sat Nov 29, 2008 11:43 pm

Make the wings at a larger angle from the body, more straight out than down.

The front could use some work, not sure how you'd do that though. Good starter!!
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Post by vecol05 Sun Nov 30, 2008 12:40 am

It's awsome but to bulky on top.
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Post by LegoBoyRobert Sun Nov 30, 2008 2:07 am

Nice! But it would be cool if you take the red off and put white! Shadow Squad Gunship! Wink Laughing
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Post by Bantha Sun Nov 30, 2008 2:09 am

Wow that looks great. I love the shadow clone.
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Post by Zepher Sun Nov 30, 2008 2:14 am

There's something about it I don't like. It's two dark and it looks incomplete. It looks okay, but not great, sorry!
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Post by Alpha Sun Nov 30, 2008 2:28 am

Agreed. I think you should send it to the hospital.

(Note, sending it to the hospital doesn't mean it's bad, it means there's room for improvment!)
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Post by Thunder-blade Sun Nov 30, 2008 2:30 am

I don't think it needs the hospital... I think it just needs more work...
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Post by Darth Yoda Sun Nov 30, 2008 2:32 am

I guess I could, but right now I'm feeling t lazy to do anything else to it... Razz
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Post by ARC CloneTrooper141 Sun Nov 30, 2008 2:42 am

It looks pretty sweet, but it looks too busy in the front. Good job though. Smile
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Post by Darth Yoda Sun Nov 30, 2008 4:37 am

Well, this is my second gunship and I didn't really improve. I guess gunships aren't my thing. I'm going to scrap this soon unless anyone has any objections... The dusk rider Evilgrin0041
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Post by Thunder-blade Sun Nov 30, 2008 5:11 am

I wouldn't be using all those smilies and stuff if I were you... Wink
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Post by DarthPineapple Sun Nov 30, 2008 7:18 am

Looks pretty cool but you've used your slopes in the front not in a 'order', which makes it very rough and ugle. The wings are too vertical and the back of the ships is too blocky. I also miss the side doors.

Apart from that, it's a neat Gunship! I love the bomb idea! Smile
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Post by -Aki- Sun Nov 30, 2008 11:05 am

Wow! This is freaking awesome! I love the bombs. great work Smile!!!
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Post by Sialboats Sun Nov 30, 2008 4:49 pm

I really don't like the missiles, I'd like some more creativity in the pilots, and the front looks like a rock Shocked , but other than that, it's good Wink !
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