The dusk rider
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The dusk rider
This is a black gunship used for night only. It has a lot of guns, and it ain't afraid ta use 'em! It's primary use though is for bombing. The dusk rider is the most heavily armed vehicle I've ever made!
Here it is.
There's some heavy firepower
The bomb hatch
What comes out of it
The bombs that come out of what comes out of the gunship.
Following missiles
Off their racks...
Who mans it? These guys!
Please keep note that this was made from scratch, and I don't have that many good gunship pieces... thanks.
Enjoy!
Here it is.
There's some heavy firepower
The bomb hatch
What comes out of it
The bombs that come out of what comes out of the gunship.
Following missiles
Off their racks...
Who mans it? These guys!
Please keep note that this was made from scratch, and I don't have that many good gunship pieces... thanks.
Enjoy!
Re: The dusk rider
Looks pretty good but this barely took you any time. The slopes sort of make it look like a "rock" in the front.
Comrade Faie- Guild Member
- Age : 28
Location : Viva La France and Rick Alstley
Re: The dusk rider
Not bad...
The back is too boxy and plain, maybe add a door or hatch of some sort?
The wings are also plain... maybe a streak of dark bley?
Guns look great! This thing would be terrifying on the battlefield!
As I said in the WIP topic, ditch the cockpit, use the other kind that was used in the original Gunship set.
The back is too boxy and plain, maybe add a door or hatch of some sort?
The wings are also plain... maybe a streak of dark bley?
Guns look great! This thing would be terrifying on the battlefield!
As I said in the WIP topic, ditch the cockpit, use the other kind that was used in the original Gunship set.
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Commander Faie wrote:Looks pretty good but this barely took you any time. The slopes sort of make it look like a "rock" in the front.
It actually took me about 5 hours in all.... which is a medium amount.
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Yeah. Use 1x2 Slopes on the side, just to balance it out. The front kinda looks like a rock. (As CFaie said. )
Overall it looks good. Just needs some straightening out here and there.
Also, make the missiles thin and sleek, and 1 shape. Unless they're bombs...
Overall it looks good. Just needs some straightening out here and there.
Also, make the missiles thin and sleek, and 1 shape. Unless they're bombs...
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 28
Re: The dusk rider
Make the wings at a larger angle from the body, more straight out than down.
The front could use some work, not sure how you'd do that though. Good starter!!
The front could use some work, not sure how you'd do that though. Good starter!!
Clonecommando007- Kinda like a UFO
- Location : Ohio
Re: The dusk rider
Nice! But it would be cool if you take the red off and put white! Shadow Squad Gunship!
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There's something about it I don't like. It's two dark and it looks incomplete. It looks okay, but not great, sorry!
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Agreed. I think you should send it to the hospital.
(Note, sending it to the hospital doesn't mean it's bad, it means there's room for improvment!)
(Note, sending it to the hospital doesn't mean it's bad, it means there's room for improvment!)
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 28
Re: The dusk rider
It looks pretty sweet, but it looks too busy in the front. Good job though.
ARC CloneTrooper141- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 30
Location : PA, USA
Re: The dusk rider
Well, this is my second gunship and I didn't really improve. I guess gunships aren't my thing. I'm going to scrap this soon unless anyone has any objections...
Re: The dusk rider
Looks pretty cool but you've used your slopes in the front not in a 'order', which makes it very rough and ugle. The wings are too vertical and the back of the ships is too blocky. I also miss the side doors.
Apart from that, it's a neat Gunship! I love the bomb idea!
Apart from that, it's a neat Gunship! I love the bomb idea!
DarthPineapple- VIP Former Staff
- Age : 29
Location : The Netherlands
Re: The dusk rider
Wow! This is freaking awesome! I love the bombs. great work !!!
-Aki-- Non-Guild Member
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Re: The dusk rider
I really don't like the missiles, I'd like some more creativity in the pilots, and the front looks like a rock , but other than that, it's good !
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