Clone Army Builders Guild
Welcome to the Clone Army Builders Guild!
You are welcome to browse as a Guest, but we invite
you to take advantage of more abilities by registering
for our website, and applying to the Guild later on.

Join the forum, it's quick and easy

Clone Army Builders Guild
Welcome to the Clone Army Builders Guild!
You are welcome to browse as a Guest, but we invite
you to take advantage of more abilities by registering
for our website, and applying to the Guild later on.
Clone Army Builders Guild
Would you like to react to this message? Create an account in a few clicks or log in to continue.

A Disturbance over Coruscant

+3
Jedi Joe
-Aki-
Alpha
7 posters

Clone Army Builders Guild :: Creations and Discussion Area :: Builders Display and Discussions Area

Go down

A Disturbance over Coruscant Empty A Disturbance over Coruscant

Post by Alpha Tue Dec 30, 2008 6:48 pm

Master Windu and Coruscant Guard Commander Fox are investigating a salvaged Acclamator I Assault Ship, that has recently reentered space above Coruscant. However, Droids may not be the only things on the ship...


A Disturbance over Coruscant Img_1838
Mace Windu crawling out of a Maintanence Tunnel on Sublevel 327.

A Disturbance over Coruscant Img_1840
On the top level, Commander Fox is dealing with 2 Battle Droids.

A Disturbance over Coruscant Img_1841
Sublevel 327.

A Disturbance over Coruscant Img_1842
Maintanence Tunnel.

A Disturbance over Coruscant Img_1843
The Maintanence Tunnel door.

A Disturbance over Coruscant Img_1844
Mechanism.
avatar
Alpha
Non-Guild Member
Non-Guild Member

Age : 28
A Disturbance over Coruscant Flag_u12

Back to top Go down

A Disturbance over Coruscant Empty Re: A Disturbance over Coruscant

Post by -Aki- Tue Dec 30, 2008 6:49 pm

Wow! That's really cool! I love the amount of greebs.
-Aki-
-Aki-
Non-Guild Member
Non-Guild Member

A Disturbance over Coruscant Flag_u10

Back to top Go down

A Disturbance over Coruscant Empty Re: A Disturbance over Coruscant

Post by Jedi Joe Tue Dec 30, 2008 6:50 pm

I seems a little dark. But it looks pretty nice!
Jedi Joe
Jedi Joe
Guild Member
Guild Member

Location : Florida, the state of neverending heat and humidity...
A Disturbance over Coruscant Flag_u12

Back to top Go down

A Disturbance over Coruscant Empty Re: A Disturbance over Coruscant

Post by Thunder-blade Tue Dec 30, 2008 6:51 pm

Not bad, it has pretty cool greebles!

The studlessness is cool too!

But how come you didn't add any SFX?
Thunder-blade
Thunder-blade
Thunder-Sharpie
Thunder-Sharpie

Age : 29
Location : A galaxy far, far away...
A Disturbance over Coruscant Flag_u12

http://mocpages.com/home.php/15131

Back to top Go down

A Disturbance over Coruscant Empty Re: A Disturbance over Coruscant

Post by Alpha Tue Dec 30, 2008 6:52 pm

Why add SFX?

It's a MOC.
avatar
Alpha
Non-Guild Member
Non-Guild Member

Age : 28
A Disturbance over Coruscant Flag_u12

Back to top Go down

A Disturbance over Coruscant Empty Re: A Disturbance over Coruscant

Post by Jedi Joe Tue Dec 30, 2008 6:52 pm

Thunder-blade wrote:Not bad, it has pretty cool greebles!

The studlessness is cool too!

But how come you didn't add any SFX?

Alph and I don't do comics like that anymore. We just do MOCs, a whole lot better! Razz
Jedi Joe
Jedi Joe
Guild Member
Guild Member

Location : Florida, the state of neverending heat and humidity...
A Disturbance over Coruscant Flag_u12

Back to top Go down

A Disturbance over Coruscant Empty Re: A Disturbance over Coruscant

Post by Thunder-blade Tue Dec 30, 2008 6:53 pm

Pssh.... that's a matter of opinion! Wink
Thunder-blade
Thunder-blade
Thunder-Sharpie
Thunder-Sharpie

Age : 29
Location : A galaxy far, far away...
A Disturbance over Coruscant Flag_u12

http://mocpages.com/home.php/15131

Back to top Go down

A Disturbance over Coruscant Empty Re: A Disturbance over Coruscant

Post by Alpha Tue Dec 30, 2008 6:53 pm

Well, no offense to any other comic makers, but most comics here have no greebles, and have an average amount of details. :\
avatar
Alpha
Non-Guild Member
Non-Guild Member

Age : 28
A Disturbance over Coruscant Flag_u12

Back to top Go down

A Disturbance over Coruscant Empty Re: A Disturbance over Coruscant

Post by Comrade Faie Tue Dec 30, 2008 6:54 pm

So no more comics from Alpha... Sad ! You were really good at them too. Fordo Yo!
avatar
Comrade Faie
Guild Member
Guild Member

Age : 28
Location : Viva La France and Rick Alstley
A Disturbance over Coruscant Flag_u12

Back to top Go down

A Disturbance over Coruscant Empty Re: A Disturbance over Coruscant

Post by Alpha Tue Dec 30, 2008 6:54 pm

I might do one once in a while... Wink
avatar
Alpha
Non-Guild Member
Non-Guild Member

Age : 28
A Disturbance over Coruscant Flag_u12

Back to top Go down

A Disturbance over Coruscant Empty Re: A Disturbance over Coruscant

Post by Jeremy012399 Tue Dec 30, 2008 7:15 pm

Looks good, there is a lot of detail.
avatar
Jeremy012399
Non-Guild Member
Non-Guild Member

Location : Why do you want to know
A Disturbance over Coruscant Flag_u12

http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=346321

Back to top Go down

A Disturbance over Coruscant Empty Re: A Disturbance over Coruscant

Post by Zepher Tue Dec 30, 2008 9:52 pm

Better lighting is required. I really can't see the MOC.
Zepher
Zepher
VIP Former Staff
VIP Former Staff

Age : 30
A Disturbance over Coruscant Flag_u12

http://mocpages.com/home.php/8408

Back to top Go down

A Disturbance over Coruscant Empty Re: A Disturbance over Coruscant

Post by Sponsored content


Sponsored content


Back to top Go down

Back to top

Clone Army Builders Guild :: Creations and Discussion Area :: Builders Display and Discussions Area

 
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum