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429th Legion

Post by Heady on Mon Jan 26, 2009 10:25 pm

Hello all,
I give you the beginning of the 429th Legion today, Senior Clone Commander Morse, and Jedi General Elom Vaolak.
The 429th Legion had been given a long string of assignments at the beginning of the war that decimated their ranks, leaving mostly inexperienced clones in the ranks. However, now, the legion has a seen a year of war, and is ready for (almost) anything Wink.


Commander Morse.
History: One of the first clones out of the tanks at Kamino, Morse has always proven to be a strong leader, and a father figure to new clones in his Legion.


General Elom Vaolak
History: Born on Rendili, as the son of two successful entrepreneurs, Vaolak is a very fierce and hot tempered Jedi. He is also slightly paranoid, and has a feeling that the clone army will amount to no good someday. Determined to be ready for that day, Vaolak sports a helmet with a HUD, and heavy armor, in order to have the same tactical advantage as his clones.

The rest of the Clones to be up soon!


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Re: 429th Legion

Post by Thunder-blade on Mon Jan 26, 2009 10:30 pm

Not bad to start with....

Is that Sharpie you used on your commander? I would suggest using the new sharpies, they are cleaner and don't smudge!

Your Jedi looks a tad odd with a hat...

Is your legion color red?
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Re: 429th Legion

Post by Igor7 on Mon Jan 26, 2009 10:32 pm

It looks all right, although your clone could be a bit neater. You should try to clean him up a bit. It's still very good though. I like the clone and your jedi.
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Re: 429th Legion

Post by cloneLieutenintLeo94 on Mon Jan 26, 2009 10:57 pm

You did a good job with the Jedi and hope to see another attempt at the trooper ( perhaps a more purist design Laughing ).
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Re: 429th Legion

Post by Uberlag on Mon Jan 26, 2009 10:59 pm

cloneLieutenintLeo94 wrote:You did a good job with the Jedi and hope to see another attempt at the trooper ( perhaps a more purist design Laughing ).

Look kid, your not a purist or a modder at all, you actually have to have a building style.
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Re: 429th Legion

Post by cloneLieutenintLeo94 on Mon Jan 26, 2009 11:01 pm

I`m only saying I like the Purist style better.
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Re: 429th Legion

Post by Sialboats on Mon Jan 26, 2009 11:13 pm

Uberlag wrote:
cloneLieutenintLeo94 wrote:You did a good job with the Jedi and hope to see another attempt at the trooper ( perhaps a more purist design Laughing ).

Look kid, your not a purist or a modder at all, you actually have to have a building style.




Spot on, Uber. First we've got noobs with no style, no MOC, only a few scrapped together mini-figs, and then we've got more noobs who've failed to present us with any MOCs at all who try to pass of critique. Speaking of which, you'll find mine in there somewhere.
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Re: 429th Legion

Post by cloneLieutenintLeo94 on Mon Jan 26, 2009 11:31 pm

Listen Sail Boats I only mean I plan to be a purist in the future when I apply for the Guild ( for now my camera is acting screwy Mad )

So if I`m a noob, okay I don`t really give a rat`s A**.
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Re: 429th Legion

Post by Alpha on Mon Jan 26, 2009 11:33 pm

cloneLieutenintLeo94 wrote:Listen Sail Boats I only mean I plan to be a purist in the future when I apply for the Guild ( for now my camera is acting screwy Mad )

So if I`m a noob, okay I don`t really give a rat`s A**.

Fail.

First, Sial is NOT A WATERCRAFT.

Second, you are acting a bit noobish, but no one's gonna listen to your critism if you don't have a reputation.

Third, I'd lay off for now, Sial, that was a tad bit harsh. Everyone has an opinion, y'know. Wink

EDIT: C'mon, he DOESN'T HAVE TO BE A PURIST. Why does it need to be purist style?

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Re: 429th Legion

Post by cloneLieutenintLeo94 on Mon Jan 26, 2009 11:39 pm

My appologies for being such a noob Sial .
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Re: 429th Legion

Post by Sialboats on Mon Jan 26, 2009 11:44 pm

Alpha wrote:
cloneLieutenintLeo94 wrote:Listen Sail Boats I only mean I plan to be a purist in the future when I apply for the Guild ( for now my camera is acting screwy Mad )

So if I`m a noob, okay I don`t really give a rat`s A**.

Fail.

Wink

First, Sial is NOT A WATERCRAFT.

You win the post!

Second, you are acting a bit noobish, but no one's gonna listen to your critism if you don't have a reputation.

Third, I'd lay off for now, Sial, that was a tad bit harsh. Everyone has an opinion, y'know. Wink

Yeah, but I've got mine Razz .

EDIT: C'mon, he DOESN'T HAVE TO BE A PURIST. Why does it need to be purist style?

Nobody said he had to be.... it just needs to be better. Two mini-figs, and poorly done at that don't exactly qualify as a legion.

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Re: 429th Legion

Post by Alpha on Mon Jan 26, 2009 11:46 pm

Sialboats wrote:
Alpha wrote:
cloneLieutenintLeo94 wrote:Listen Sail Boats I only mean I plan to be a purist in the future when I apply for the Guild ( for now my camera is acting screwy Mad )

So if I`m a noob, okay I don`t really give a rat`s A**.

Fail.

Wink

First, Sial is NOT A WATERCRAFT.

You win the post!

Exactly.

Second, you are acting a bit noobish, but no one's gonna listen to your critism if you don't have a reputation.

Third, I'd lay off for now, Sial, that was a tad bit harsh. Everyone has an opinion, y'know. Wink

Yeah, but I've got mine Razz .

True. Razz

EDIT: C'mon, he DOESN'T HAVE TO BE A PURIST. Why does it need to be purist style?

Nobody said he had to be.... it just needs to be better. Two mini-figs, and poorly done at that don't exactly qualify as a legion.

Sorry, I was referencing to Leo's post.

On topic, I can't wait for some vehicles! Sounds good!

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Re: 429th Legion

Post by Jedi Joe on Tue Jan 27, 2009 12:18 am

Alpha wrote:
EDIT: C'mon, he DOESN'T HAVE TO BE A PURIST. Why does it need to be purist style?

And this is coming from a purist! Razz

Good stuff though, H3D1! But as people said, work on your sharpie skills a little bit.
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Re: 429th Legion

Post by Heady on Fri Apr 17, 2009 2:43 am

Update on Legion leaders, the rest are nearing completion!
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