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222nd Legion Chronicles: The Lost Boys

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Post by Clonecommando007 Thu Jan 29, 2009 6:06 pm

Greetings Guilders!

After lots of work on a new set and aquisition learning how to use the GIMP program, I am finally able to present to you...

222nd Legion Chronicles: The Lost Boys

If you haven't already, please read the previous four comics in this series before reading this one.

Now on to the Comic!

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And that concludes the fifth comic in the 222nd Legion Chronicles. If you read the comic in it's entirety, you will probably have a good idea of what the next comic will be about. I hope you liked this newest installment in my Legion's Chronicles!

Comments and Constructive Criticism welcome.
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Post by Blue-Thunder Thu Jan 29, 2009 6:15 pm

Constructive criticisim: It's best of you desaturate the hologram BEFORE you make it blue, but it's ok. Nice work CC007!
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Post by DarthPineapple Thu Jan 29, 2009 6:18 pm

That's another great comic! 2 things you should work on though:

The space you see through the bridge is WAY too busy, just stars are enough.
You have P1's fighter and the commanders are P2? Odd.
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Post by -Aki- Thu Jan 29, 2009 6:20 pm

Brilliant! Just brilliant! The mocs, the minifigs, the action, everything!
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Post by Clonecommando007 Thu Jan 29, 2009 6:21 pm

DarthPineapple wrote:You have P1's fighter and the commanders are P2? Odd.
No...The only Phase I troopers there are in the Comic are the ones from the 9th Cavalry Regiment that were lost after the Battle of Geonosis. They are all Phase 1's because they were lost before Phase II armor was invented. Everyone else is Phase II.
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Post by bonehead Thu Jan 29, 2009 6:28 pm

Now that was cool! Nothing bad to say about it. great job! Smile
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Post by DarthPineapple Thu Jan 29, 2009 6:34 pm

Clonecommando007 wrote:
DarthPineapple wrote:You have P1's fighter and the commanders are P2? Odd.
No...The only Phase I troopers there are in the Comic are the ones from the 9th Cavalry Regiment that were lost after the Battle of Geonosis. They are all Phase 1's because they were lost before Phase II armor was invented. Everyone else is Phase II.

Oooh... so that's the 9th Cavalry!
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Post by Clonecommando007 Thu Jan 29, 2009 6:36 pm

Yea, all of the Phase I's in the pictures are the 9th Cavalry Division. Sorry if that was confusing. You don't really know they're Cavalry because you don't see them with any tanks in this episode! But that will change...
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Post by Tac Thu Jan 29, 2009 6:37 pm

Clonecommando007 wrote:
DarthPineapple wrote:You have P1's fighter and the commanders are P2? Odd.
No...The only Phase I troopers there are in the Comic are the ones from the 9th Cavalry Regiment that were lost after the Battle of Geonosis. They are all Phase 1's because they were lost before Phase II armor was invented. Everyone else is Phase II.

Brilliant idea!

I love the story, the ship and, well, pretty much everything! Razz
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Post by ODST7 Thu Jan 29, 2009 7:15 pm

Awesome work! I love how they came back.
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Post by Zepher Thu Jan 29, 2009 7:56 pm

Only one problem... one year (and a half)? For a ship? They would of had to have run out of troops before then.

Awesome work! Very cool scene. Battle was very well handled! I advize lego blood, but over all fantastic!
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Post by thunder-clone Thu Jan 29, 2009 8:28 pm

great comic, the idea of the 9th calvalry regiment to still have p1 men.

Again great comic.
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Post by Comrade Faie Thu Jan 29, 2009 8:29 pm

great plot man! I love your ships too, pretty soon I'll be building the bridge of my ship. This is really great! It's up there with Sial's and Zeph's!
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Post by Jens Thu Jan 29, 2009 8:50 pm

I love this comic! I really like the idea of them battling over a ship over a year and then they come back in phase.

That combat engineer looks familiar Wink
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Post by 667thLegion Thu Jan 29, 2009 9:37 pm

Nicely done! The idea of P1 armor for the 9th Regiment was brilliant! Over all great job! Smile
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Post by deanalmarresh Thu Jan 29, 2009 9:44 pm

Nice work, great effort in your creations, I rather like your creations.
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Post by Thunder-blade Thu Jan 29, 2009 10:15 pm

Dang, what an epic storyline!!

That was awesome!
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Post by commander charlie Thu Jan 29, 2009 10:27 pm

Loved it but at first i thought the 9th cavalry was in a city. Anyhow keep it up


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Post by Jedi Joe Thu Jan 29, 2009 10:54 pm

That was pretty cool! I like how the CIS invaded the venator!
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Post by Muskey15 Thu Jan 29, 2009 11:27 pm

Excellent work, CC-007! I saw this on Brickshelf today, and it is great! The effects are awesome!
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Post by LegoBoyRobert Fri Jan 30, 2009 12:03 am

Nicely done, CC. The Phase 1 9th Cavalry was great! That's a danged nice idea that the CIS invaded venator! Smile
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Post by Clonecommando007 Fri Jan 30, 2009 12:41 am

Jens wrote:I love this comic! I really like the idea of them battling over a ship over a year and then they come back in phase.

That combat engineer looks familiar Wink
Yea, to all: Jen's modded troopers inspired me to make my Combat Engineer.

Also, the 9th Cavalry's ship was an Acclamator. They didn't have Venators used that early in the Clone Wars when they departed. Also, though Acclamators can hold 16,000 troopers, a Regiment is just over 2,000, so there was plenty of supplies/consumables/quarters, etc.

The technique the CIS used to board was pull it out of hyperspace near the moon with a CIS interdictor cruiser, board on one side of the ship in a hangar, and swarm the ship. The Acclamator was divided in two parts lengthwise during most of the first year, the Trandoshan led Battle Droids controlling the left side of the ship, with the 9th Cavalry controlling the right side of the ship. After months and months of small lightning raids into enemy compartments on the other side of the ship by both sides, the Republic finally started capturing several compartments per day. Though the progress was slow, it was steady, and over the period of half a year, the entire ship was re-captured. The Bridge was the last part held by the CIS, and the assault on the bridge was shown in this comic.

Here's a picture for you to grasp the size of the ship with all of the compartments in it:
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Post by flare Fri Jan 30, 2009 12:51 am

CC save it for the next comic. Make the commanders take on how they been missing so much.... Wink
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Post by tygerb Fri Jan 30, 2009 1:35 am

I love the whole phase one and phase two clones.
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Post by cloneLieutenintLeo94 Fri Jan 30, 2009 1:53 am

I think the story line is very creative Laughing and also the MOCs are great ( I`m gonna try that idea for Trandos Wink ).


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