541st Vendetta #1: Bittersweet

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Just plot development for the first comic. Still working out my temperate building style. Also including a new time mechanic to the story.

But, where's the violence and gore?

Maybe there was no action, but it was really well written, good job!

Wow! This wonderful, glad to see you revived the series.

Matchstick wrote:But, where's the violence and gore?

You should find violence and gore in the second ....

ODST7 wrote:Wow! This wonderful, glad to see you revived the series.

It was never dead! Simply being worked on !

Oh my... these effects are awesome! Especially in the first few pics!

The story and dialogue is once again top-notch! The attention to detail is astounding!

Your sets.. everything...

*goes into cardiac arrest*

The writing is amazing! I really love the way that you played the idea of a basic clone(commanders are special, and all, but not as independent as commandos or ARCs) coming into a regular lifestyle was great; I'd say on Traviss level, and that's sayin' something.

Finally, someone listened to me about character development! Okay, so Ied's reactions to 'normal' life are pretty familiar to those who've read Triple Zero, but hey, I enjoyed it.

Sweet job! I love the burial ground! But it was sad to see Meehan dead. I love the house that they went to! The house is very relistic. There was anything wrong with the comic!

Nice, it was very realistic! Love the burial!

Nice! Another character developement, aye?

I really need to BL some bley plates, I barely have any.

Nice, original comic idea you have there. Nice base.

The Jinja Ninja wrote:Finally, someone listened to me about character development! Okay, so Ied's reactions to 'normal' life are pretty familiar to those who've read Triple Zero, but hey, I enjoyed it.

I left you a long comment about that on mine

But I agree with Jinj, so happy to see characters coming out, something I've needled you about for a while too. How'd Meehan die again? He was shot, but he recovered on Arkania, I think...

Zepher wrote:

The Jinja Ninja wrote:Finally, someone listened to me about character development! Okay, so Ied's reactions to 'normal' life are pretty familiar to those who've read Triple Zero, but hey, I enjoyed it.

I left you a long comment about that on mine

But I agree with Jinj, so happy to see characters coming out, something I've needled you about for a while too. How'd Meehan die again? He was shot, but he recovered on Arkania, I think...

You thought. He died from a fatal wound to the chest .

great! The detail about the food is good, and I like the new Ied!! Awesome!

Sial, why did you release these 2 episodes right at the same time?

(not that I'm complaining, I loved that you did it all at once, I'm just curious at the reason behind it.)

Thunder-blade wrote:Sial, why did you release these 2 episodes right at the same time?

(not that I'm complaining, I loved that you did it all at once, I'm just curious at the reason behind it.)

I felt that I hadn't been keeping up with the weekly comic standard, so this is sort of my paying of the comic debt.

Ah.

That makes sense, I think I need to pay off my comic debt too..

I think you should of gone back to the weekly format, and not of released two Sial. Things take breaks in between seasons, and this should too!

great job! I love how simple it is but it still pulled me in!

Heh heh, I like how he chugs the wine.

Good work Sial! I love how you had this one for character development! I loved how Ied chugged the wine, and how he is finally being told about alcohol poisoning!

I also love how you captured Ansion's climate and terrain perfectly, I hope some of the natives make an appearance. That would be awesome!

And, is the kama Ied's wearing the one I sent you?

Jedi Joe wrote:I also love how you captured Ansion's climate and terrain perfectly, I hope some of the natives make an appearance. That would be awesome!

And, is the kama Ied's wearing the one I sent you?

I'm still trying to find out a way to make them lizardy enough... they're not trandos, but they're not human either, y'know.

And, yes .

The Killer Croc piece maybe? Found in Spider Man sets.

Zepher wrote:The Killer Croc piece maybe? Found in Spider Man sets.

No... too sinister. A rodian might work, maybe in olive green and without all the antenae. I might have to look into that . I'm just glad the Human population is greater than the native .