The Battle for Persolicia

Meant to look blown out.

The City of Persolicia was built on a unlevel and wierd terrain, as shown below

(Lacking GIMP Diagram... I'll make one later...)

Many buildings were built into mountains, and the city was balanced on a bunch of canyons and mountains.

(Forgive my stupid writing skills. I got zero hours of sleep....)

When the the war broke out, the city literally fell to pieces. Many building were destoryed, losing walls and roofs. Streets feel apart, as did the poplution.

The Leader of the City chose to side with the CIS, thinking that the benefiets would be higher, while the High General refused to side with the clearly, in his mind, evil. Going behind the leader's back he called in the Republic. The city split in two, and the battle for control began.





























Critic away, please. I've saved this creation becuase I want to see how to improve it (and I need to photograph it as a set for the 313th comics (Season 3!!! Looking ahead!!!!)

-Zeph

I like it, the level of sub detail is great. The clone on fire made me laugh.

What the heck is going on?

I like it, but it is kinda crowded, and it's hard to tell whats happening.

Other than that, good work!

Nice, although a bit plain.

DarthPineapple wrote:Nice, although a bit plain.

Very well. What woul you like to see added?

Hmmm, maybe make it a bit wider but I like the action in it! Nice job Zeph!

Zepher wrote:

DarthPineapple wrote:Nice, although a bit plain.

Very well. What woul you like to see added?

Detail. Maybe some more rocks or a better platform.

I think you should make it bigger, put in more detail, and no civilians. They doon't look out windows! Other than that it is great.

why wrote:I think you should make it bigger, put in more detail, and no civilians. They doon't look out windows! Other than that it is great.

I believe that is the High General.

Don't have the pieces to make it bigger. What detail do you want to see why. Detail in general is to vauge.

And yes. Jens is correct. Geneuis!

It's kinda simple.

There are slopes and buildings, but there aren't really any cool "techniques".
I see mostly basic building in this one.

Not bad for a start though. If you were to add more detail and use some more techniques this could be really nice!

So what techniues do you want?

I don't know what to fix if al you say is "more detail" I could throw a hell of a lot more stuff on, but it won't make it better unless I know what is wrong. More technique? What would you like to see. What techniques are good?

Larger, and more greebles on the buildings.

Eh I'm not really taken on this one Zeph. Everything else I have seen by you makes this one look not so good. I have to say though there are a few features I like. Like the burning trooper and the use of the med capsule pieces. But it could use some greebles.

I really like the burning trooper but the hole moc seems kind of crowded and messy...