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What My Order 66 Entry Should Have Looked Like

Post by legorevolution on Thu Apr 03, 2008 5:01 am

The following post is what my Order 66 entry should have looked like. Unfortunately time got me, and I couldn't include all I wanted to. The differences are small, just two new pics and a little altered story. Hope you guys like it though.



...Grievous and his forces have dug in deep back in the Utapau system. A recent firefight has broken out, but we are expecting a victory on our behalf. What is your current situation?



My lord, they are over-running us! It is not much longer until our forces lose to those of the Republic, as well as the planet itself! To make matters worse they've cut off our supply lines and orbitally blocked the entire planet!

The Republic may be strong but they are blind. They have constantly overlooked your lab, and will continue to do so. Once I recieve positive feedback on the prototype I will send a few of my people to retrieve it, as well as re-enforcements. Remain calm and continue research; no harm will come to you or your workers.

General! The probe is showing targets clearly ahead just beyond this ventilation shaft!

Very good commander, let us proceed with caution.

Crash! What are you doing?! Put your helmet back on trooper!

Sir, the helmet is too hot, and distorts the visual I have on my charges... heh heh.
Why are you setting charges?! You know the CIS doesn't use intelligent nor strict security measures! We can just lift those grates up you know?

Yes sir of course I know! But where would all the fun be without an explosion or two?

Crash, you are an odd one, and sometimes I don't think you are of the same Genetic Material as us. Very well, finish up setting the charges and we'll be on our way.

bee-oooo-weeeee-oooo... how is the prototype coming along?
We're still testing out the solutio-ooooo-on from the plant, but it should be ready in a couple of days.

We don't have a couple of days! Our lord wishes to have unit production started within the next few weeks! If we don't meet the deadline, our re-enforcements will be depleted!

I am aware your Highness, but the proper procedures and developments put into this new droid will send the Republic and those Jedi back to Coruscant! I beg you, we need time to make the proper adjustments!

With time and the appropriate measures we can easily make up for production set backs. We need that droid to be....
*Clank!*

Roger, did you hear something?

No.

*Blam-Blam-Blam-Blam-Blam!
Uh-Oh...

*Blam-Blam-Blam-Blam-Blam! We-oooooo-weeee-oooo are under attack! *Blam-Blam-Blam-Blam-Blam!

*Beeeew-Beeew! Get that unit up and running immediatly!

Your Highness, the unit is still not ready! *Blam-Blam-Blam-Blam-Blam!

Do it!

I told you it's not ready!
Here, give me that!

*Blam-Blam-Blam-Bla-...

What do you think your doing?! Drop the control now!

Why won't it activate!

Drop it!

I told you it's not ready your highness!

*Beeewwwsshhhhh!
I told you to drop it!

Ahhhhgggghhh...

You are in a non-life threatening situation. We will give you medical attention if you wish to comply. Now tell us, what's going on in this facility eh?

........yes, right away my lord......

I would never betray the Techno-Union and leak Confederate secrets to a Jedi!

Excu-oooooo-uu-ooo-se me Jedi, I'll do anything to live! Please, let me make it worth your while! That fungal growth, it's highly unstable! We found it on Felucia, and we're processing materials found within it which enhance thinking capabilities and rage. We're trying to develope solution and technology into this new droid model!

Excellent, well you may live, but on the other hand, YOU my friend.....

Aghhh haag haaa hag hah! You fool! I have the last laugh now! You don't understand the power of this growth, it will kill us all now!

Well, I highly doubt that because I don't sense-
*Kkkktt-kt-ktttt! Kcct-kt-Kt! Kct-Kt.

*Bew! Bewbew bew! Be-be-be-beww! Blam-blam-blam-blam! Bew-be-be-be-bew!

Keep moving it!

We gave you all the information you wanted. Please what else could you want in exchange for our-

Commander! I believe you were looking for this.

Ah yes, such an elegant and powerful toy...

...But only a toy. We'll hide this for safe keeping now, and deliver it to the right hands later.

...aghh the growth will kill us all! Hahg aha gha!

Zap him to keep him quiet, and watch the step here.

Commander, when are we scheduled to depart from this hell-hole of a world?

What, you don't like Saleucami?

No, I just think it's time to move on to another world, our job here is done.

It's not done until every Jedi is dead on this rock, it's our post, duty-wait did you hear something?

No Commander.

All right, lets move out!

*grgthkkkcct.... raaaaaaah!
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Re: What My Order 66 Entry Should Have Looked Like

Post by astoriabluelegos on Thu Apr 03, 2008 6:22 am

I'll say it again WOW! Hola Wow! I love the look, and that Mechno-chair is pure AWESOMNES!!!! Hola Wow! Blue Arc
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Re: What My Order 66 Entry Should Have Looked Like

Post by legorevolution on Thu Apr 03, 2008 7:46 am

I know! Also thank you! Smile I wish I coulda finished in time to add those two pictures. I loved the chair, and loved Sidious. Too bad that stupid greebly wall took FOREVER, and I'm not even too pleased with it Roll Eyes I've done better walls.
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Post by Clonecommando007 on Thu Apr 03, 2008 11:46 am

What exactly happens to the jedi at the end?
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Post by 80-0 on Thu Apr 03, 2008 1:07 pm

I think she uses the plant(of unknown origin) to revive herself. Also, I love that mechno-chair! Even better than the first! Smile

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Post by DarthPineapple on Thu Apr 03, 2008 2:40 pm

I like that walking chair thing! Smile
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Post by legorevolution on Thu Apr 03, 2008 8:32 pm

DarthPineapple wrote:I like that walking chair thing! Smile

Yeah I like it too, it's supposed to be a mechno-chair. You can see one in Episode I when Nute Gunray and associates are on Naboo and talking to Sidious.

As for CC007, the Jedi is male, and yes the plant is very dangerous and parasitic. He was killed, but when the clones "overkilled" him, they also shot down a bulb from the plant which fell onto his face. It leaked and grew into his skull, eventually gettting inside and taking over internally. It is now using the Jedi as a host victim, and will continue to thrive inside assuming he won't get killed again. As said in the moc, the plant causes rage and strenght beyond normal proportions. Using the Jedi as a host, the parasite will continue to seek out and destroy anything and everything for it's own survival and reproduction. I'm planning on taking the story into a series of many mocs which will show the destruction capable, and the very true threat it poses to the galaxy. Hope that clarifies it up a little. Smile
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Re: What My Order 66 Entry Should Have Looked Like

Post by MrMeticulous on Thu Apr 03, 2008 8:46 pm

I must say...this is one of the most thorough LEGO photonovels I've seen. Legorevolution... A toast!
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Post by Clonecommando007 on Thu Apr 03, 2008 8:59 pm

legorevolution wrote:
As for CC007, the Jedi is male, and yes the plant is very dangerous and parasitic. He was killed, but when the clones "overkilled" him, they also shot down a bulb from the plant which fell onto his face. It leaked and grew into his skull, eventually gettting inside and taking over internally. It is now using the Jedi as a host victim, and will continue to thrive inside assuming he won't get killed again. As said in the moc, the plant causes rage and strenght beyond normal proportions. Using the Jedi as a host, the parasite will continue to seek out and destroy anything and everything for it's own survival and reproduction. I'm planning on taking the story into a series of many mocs which will show the destruction capable, and the very true threat it poses to the galaxy. Hope that clarifies it up a little. Smile

*CoughSEQUELCough* Well, that's pretty intresting! I am looking forward to this upcoming series. Smile I'd like to see it tie in to the Great Jedi Purge somehow, because clones were involved in the purge and I love clones. Laughing
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Post by Zepher on Thu Apr 03, 2008 9:34 pm

Love it. Not much else to say.
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Post by legorevolution on Thu Apr 03, 2008 10:21 pm

MrMeticulous wrote:I must say...this is one of the most thorough LEGO photonovels I've seen. Legorevolution... A toast!

Why thank you MrMeticulous, I really like to go into detail when I create my mocs to make it as accurate, detailed, and entertaining (ADE) as possible. By the way, welcome to the Guild!

CC007, oh yes, I've had the sequels planned in my head before I even created this moc. As a teaser, I will also let you know that they will tie into the Great Jedi Purge, as well as the whole Rise of the Empire/ morphing of Clormies into Stromies!
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cool!

Post by -Aki- on Wed Apr 09, 2008 1:00 pm

Nice story! I love the background and the techno union guys. just one thing that leaves me stumped: why did one of the techno guys go mad?
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Post by astoriabluelegos on Wed Apr 09, 2008 4:54 pm

I just realized, you stole my idea for clone leg detail, I demand $500,000,000.00 to compensate for you stealing my idea, you will hear from my lawyer! Razz HAHAHA Just kidding, it looks great, I'm glad someone else noticed the potential in Alpha Team legs for Clone Troopers. Wink Blue Arc

Here's MY clone who uses those legs:

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Post by legorevolution on Wed Apr 09, 2008 6:42 pm

astoriabluelegos wrote:I just realized, you stole my idea for clone leg detail, I demand $500,000,000.00 to compensate for you stealing my idea, you will hear from my lawyer! Razz HAHAHA Just kidding, it looks great, I'm glad someone else noticed the potential in Alpha Team legs for Clone Troopers. Wink Blue Arc

Here's MY clone who uses those legs:


Haha I guess I accidently did... eh... sorry haha. Yes, the alpha legs have so much potential, have you checked out the newer versions of the alpha legs? They'd make a perfect pair of legs for a commander because they have what appear to be kamas on the side.
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Post by Clonecommando007 on Thu Apr 10, 2008 2:24 am

I commented on this at FBTB, legorev.
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Post by legorevolution on Thu Apr 10, 2008 2:26 am

And it was a lovely comment at that CC007! Haha thanks. If you read the story on mccpages I cleaned it up even more. It's as good as it will get now. I am finished and content. Smile
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Post by thunder-clone on Sun Sep 14, 2008 9:53 am

It is really good and is probably the best thing I've seen so far. I also like the choice of clones. I think 5/5. All Hail!
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Post by 80-0 on Sun Sep 14, 2008 1:08 pm

Hey thunder-clone, I hope you will read this question I have for YOU:

HOW OLD IS THIS THREAD?

Smile

Please, by all means answer!


Everyone else, try not to taunt him. Smile

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Post by The Jinja Ninja on Sun Sep 14, 2008 1:17 pm

Trust me, he won't read it. (Go ooooooon, prove me wrong.)
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Post by 80-0 on Sun Sep 14, 2008 1:19 pm

Yup, that's why I posted that new thread somewhere... Razz

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Post by ARC CloneTrooper141 on Sun Sep 14, 2008 1:21 pm

Banish thee!!!! Mad
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Post by 80-0 on Sun Sep 14, 2008 1:21 pm

ARC CloneTrooper141 wrote:Banish thee!!!! Mad

Totally! He double posts with an edit to the first one without editing it... Mad

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Post by TK47 on Sun Sep 14, 2008 1:49 pm

Hola Wow! Amazing, i'd love to shoot up a stop-motion with that set you made, I especialy like the strecher, well done Smile
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Post by DarthPineapple on Sun Sep 14, 2008 2:23 pm

TK47 wrote:Hola Wow! Amazing, i'd love to shoot up a stop-motion with that set you made, I especialy like the strecher, well done Smile

TK47 you're almost as worse as Thunder. The only difference is you don't strat to bump old topics, but you still post useless comments... Roll Eyes Just STOP.
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