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The Scorpion *Updated*

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The Scorpion *Updated*

Post by RubbahBand on Mon Aug 17, 2009 8:36 pm

Update


Front view.


Back view.

Old




Oh no a blurry back shot!

The Scorpion
Named for it's yellow coloring- This was a vehicle used in the clone wars but rarely saw action. It was used as a anti-infantry vehicle but was also used to move troops around quickly to the front lines. C&C are welcome. Yeah I scrapped the Anakin's Star Fighter set for this. Smile


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Re: The Scorpion *Updated*

Post by Sialboats on Mon Aug 17, 2009 8:45 pm

Bad, bad, frontal cannon. A shorter minigun, laser cannon, or some other weapon would be preferable. Additionally, the AT designation was exclusively for Rothana walkers Wink.

However, aside from that, the layering is decent, and the craft - while flat and unimaginative - is... well, is right at the middle of the acceptability continuum. So here's to not failing Razz !
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Re: The Scorpion *Updated*

Post by RubbahBand on Mon Aug 17, 2009 8:46 pm

Well then I'll change the name here.... Razz
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Re: The Scorpion

Post by Cyrus on Mon Aug 17, 2009 10:45 pm

It's pretty good.
Congrats on getting into the guild!
Yay! Now I'm the next person who should be in the Guild! Razz
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Re: The Scorpion *Updated*

Post by Sialboats on Mon Aug 17, 2009 11:21 pm

Pyro Hawk wrote:
Yay! Now I'm the next person who should be in the Guild! Razz




>.>


<.<







Seriously... nobody likes the blatantly overconfident... Wink .

Not to mention the totally off-topic, as he also was. Wink-ABL
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Re: The Scorpion *Updated*

Post by Gerrard on Tue Aug 18, 2009 12:00 am

Front cannon is way to thin and looks useless here really. Razz

But otherwise, it is a nice design and a good idea! Congrats on the guild acceptance!
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Re: The Scorpion *Updated*

Post by Thunder-blade on Tue Aug 18, 2009 1:37 am

Glad to see you made it into the Guild. (I voted for ya. But that's besides the point)

This is not your best MOC, it's too flat on the bottom, and it needs more detail..

Love your other MOCs though!
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Re: The Scorpion *Updated*

Post by astoriabluelegos on Tue Aug 18, 2009 4:10 am

It's not a bad start, it looks kind of like a flying kayak, which for some reason appeals to me. Laughing Blue Arc
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Re: The Scorpion *Updated*

Post by MilitaMoose on Tue Aug 18, 2009 10:41 am

Nice little speeder. Except for the frontal gun, I like it.
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Re: The Scorpion *Updated*

Post by RubbahBand on Tue Aug 18, 2009 8:11 pm

I'm still advancing up in building still but I'm going to update it. Smile (HA NO T&H&E!)
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Re: The Scorpion *Updated*

Post by legorevolution on Wed Aug 19, 2009 12:30 am

The back engine section looks pretty neat. I think this has a lot more potential if you fix up the front a little. Wink
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Re: The Scorpion *Updated*

Post by 80-0 on Wed Aug 19, 2009 12:36 am

Sorry Sial. Anonymous Rebel Pilot = Derek Klivian. Wow this thing looks'oh:

@ MOC: Methinks it needs a cockpit! It's fundamentally a slow, slightly more heavily armed, speeder bike, which is dreadfully inefficient in combat. The speed of the speeder bike makes up for the lack of armor, but the lack of armor on this isn't made up for by much at all. I'd add two cannons back where the cockpit area is, add an actual cockpit, and put some real boosters in the rear.

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Re: The Scorpion *Updated*

Post by RubbahBand on Wed Aug 19, 2009 2:05 am

80-0 wrote:Sorry Sial. Anonymous Rebel Pilot = Derek Klivian. Wow this thing looks'oh:

@ MOC: Methinks it needs a cockpit! It's fundamentally a slow, slightly more heavily armed, speeder bike, which is dreadfully inefficient in combat. The speed of the speeder bike makes up for the lack of armor, but the lack of armor on this isn't made up for by much at all. I'd add two cannons back where the cockpit area is, add an actual cockpit, and put some real boosters in the rear.
Pwn and since when was that a speeder bike? Anyways I'm working on the updates currently so a list of things on the to do:

To Do
-Beef up front
-Bigger cannons are always good
-2 more minor engines (I assume)
-Add a possible cockpit (Which means I'll have to raise the level of the bricks)

That is all I think there is!
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Guess who?

Post by 3Ace3 on Wed Aug 19, 2009 11:14 pm

Guess who got in? Anyway, this is good. Try adding another gun or two on the side.
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Re: The Scorpion *Updated*

Post by RubbahBand on Thu Aug 20, 2009 12:52 am

I tried adding two mini cannons on the side and honestly, it doesn't look to good. Wink
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Re: The Scorpion *Updated*

Post by Green Tee on Thu Aug 20, 2009 12:54 am

Then make the cockpit, then have like a passenger area, with two clones with heavy duty blasters sitting there blasting away.
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Re: The Scorpion *Updated*

Post by RubbahBand on Thu Aug 20, 2009 1:00 am

CommanderKill wrote:Then make the cockpit, then have like a passenger area, with two clones with heavy duty blasters sitting there blasting away.
To late for the heavy duty cannons and passenger area, I updated it.

The Scorpion


Front view.


Back view.
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The Scorpion *Updated*

Post by Commanderblueleader96 on Thu Aug 20, 2009 1:18 am

Not only does the updated version look a lot better, it seems as if it could really help on the battlefield if you know what I mean. It looks like it would have some real purpose.
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The Scorpion *Updated*

Post by Cyrus on Thu Aug 20, 2009 1:21 am

Now THAT'S, 100,000 times better!
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Re: The Scorpion *Updated*

Post by 80-0 on Thu Aug 20, 2009 1:57 am

It really needs an armament if it's an anti-infantry vehicle. Some better lighting would be nice, too. Try using the flash, but make sure you don't use it when the camera's right up close to the vehicle. Wink

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Re: The Scorpion *Updated*

Post by RubbahBand on Thu Aug 20, 2009 2:05 am

Okay very small cannons to add (wonder how I'm going to make that...).
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Re: The Scorpion *Updated*

Post by 3Ace3 on Thu Aug 20, 2009 9:29 pm

I really like the new one. Good job, and keep up the good work. Kashyyyk
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