The Scorpion *Updated*

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Front view.


Back view.

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Oh no a blurry back shot!

The Scorpion
Named for it's yellow coloring- This was a vehicle used in the clone wars but rarely saw action. It was used as a anti-infantry vehicle but was also used to move troops around quickly to the front lines. C&C are welcome. Yeah I scrapped the Anakin's Star Fighter set for this.

Bad, bad, frontal cannon. A shorter minigun, laser cannon, or some other weapon would be preferable. Additionally, the AT designation was exclusively for Rothana walkers .

However, aside from that, the layering is decent, and the craft - while flat and unimaginative - is... well, is right at the middle of the acceptability continuum. So here's to not failing !

Well then I'll change the name here....

It's pretty good.
Congrats on getting into the guild!
Yay! Now I'm the next person who should be in the Guild!

Pyro Hawk wrote:
Yay! Now I'm the next person who should be in the Guild!

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Seriously... nobody likes the blatantly overconfident... .

Not to mention the totally off-topic, as he also was. -ABL

Front cannon is way to thin and looks useless here really.

But otherwise, it is a nice design and a good idea! Congrats on the guild acceptance!

Glad to see you made it into the Guild. (I voted for ya. But that's besides the point)

This is not your best MOC, it's too flat on the bottom, and it needs more detail..

Love your other MOCs though!

It's not a bad start, it looks kind of like a flying kayak, which for some reason appeals to me.

Nice little speeder. Except for the frontal gun, I like it.

I'm still advancing up in building still but I'm going to update it. (HA NO T&H&E!)

The back engine section looks pretty neat. I think this has a lot more potential if you fix up the front a little.

Sorry Sial. Anonymous Rebel Pilot = Derek Klivian. 'oh:

@ MOC: Methinks it needs a cockpit! It's fundamentally a slow, slightly more heavily armed, speeder bike, which is dreadfully inefficient in combat. The speed of the speeder bike makes up for the lack of armor, but the lack of armor on this isn't made up for by much at all. I'd add two cannons back where the cockpit area is, add an actual cockpit, and put some real boosters in the rear.

80-0 wrote:Sorry Sial. Anonymous Rebel Pilot = Derek Klivian. 'oh:

@ MOC: Methinks it needs a cockpit! It's fundamentally a slow, slightly more heavily armed, speeder bike, which is dreadfully inefficient in combat. The speed of the speeder bike makes up for the lack of armor, but the lack of armor on this isn't made up for by much at all. I'd add two cannons back where the cockpit area is, add an actual cockpit, and put some real boosters in the rear.

Pwn and since when was that a speeder bike? Anyways I'm working on the updates currently so a list of things on the to do:

To Do
-Beef up front
-Bigger cannons are always good
-2 more minor engines (I assume)
-Add a possible cockpit (Which means I'll have to raise the level of the bricks)

That is all I think there is!

Guess who got in? Anyway, this is good. Try adding another gun or two on the side.

I tried adding two mini cannons on the side and honestly, it doesn't look to good.

Then make the cockpit, then have like a passenger area, with two clones with heavy duty blasters sitting there blasting away.

CommanderKill wrote:Then make the cockpit, then have like a passenger area, with two clones with heavy duty blasters sitting there blasting away.

To late for the heavy duty cannons and passenger area, I updated it.

The Scorpion


Front view.


Back view.

Not only does the updated version look a lot better, it seems as if it could really help on the battlefield if you know what I mean. It looks like it would have some real purpose.

Now THAT'S, 100,000 times better!

It really needs an armament if it's an anti-infantry vehicle. Some better lighting would be nice, too. Try using the flash, but make sure you don't use it when the camera's right up close to the vehicle.

Okay very small cannons to add (wonder how I'm going to make that...).

I really like the new one. Good job, and keep up the good work.