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The Warbird-44

Post by Thunder-blade on Sat Oct 03, 2009 4:06 pm



Gallery, or at least, a link where you can find a gallery. Wink

Originally built for the Gbuild, but I was too late. Whatever. It was a fun build.
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Re: The Warbird-44

Post by (insert name here) on Sat Oct 03, 2009 4:10 pm

Overall design is good. But I think it needs more of a rounded nose.
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Post by Thunder-blade on Sat Oct 03, 2009 5:10 pm

I could make it more rounded I guess.

I just built it to get back into MOCing.
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Re: The Warbird-44

Post by astoriabluelegos on Sun Oct 04, 2009 3:03 am

It's a bit chunky for works of your's TB. That said it's O.K. as a MOC, but not you're best work in my opinion. The wings need more swoop to them, and the cockpit should be more pointed. Unless it is some sort of civilian or industrial vehicle, then it's probaly okay as-is. Wink Blue Arc

EDIT: I do like the greebs though.


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Post by (insert name here) on Sun Oct 04, 2009 3:05 am

^ That's gotta be the first time I've seen ABL give constructive criticism. Razz
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Re: The Warbird-44

Post by Darth Yoda on Sun Oct 04, 2009 5:37 am

Yea, if abl says that I suggest you revisit the idea later. Wink


I think the wings need some more tiles and length.
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Post by Gerrard on Sun Oct 04, 2009 3:36 pm

Indeed, the front and the end of the wings need a rounded, or pointed back piece. It's a cool creation, but not your best. Wink
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Post by Troopa Daisy on Sun Oct 04, 2009 4:45 pm

I like the back and the wings most. I think it looks kind of cool! Smile
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