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Bowling For Droids (GBuild)

Post by Gerrard on Sun Oct 25, 2009 10:00 pm

I think that this has improved a bit.

My camcorder sucks for pictures, sorry about that, but I tried to make the background the best possible.

It may look like the clone is just standing in the middle, but from the angle I shot it it just looks like it. He is actually very secure. Wink

Tell me if this is an improvement!

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Re: Bowling For Droids (GBuild)

Post by Troopa Daisy on Sun Oct 25, 2009 10:03 pm

The mech has improved a bit. Try and give the clone a bit more protection. As for the ground, it could use a bit more details like jagged rocks or something like that. A good improvement from last time though. Wink Smile
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Re: Bowling For Droids (GBuild)

Post by Gerrard on Sun Oct 25, 2009 10:07 pm

Thanks, I was really aiming for C&C on the mech, but thanks though!
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Re: Bowling For Droids (GBuild)

Post by Cyrus on Sun Oct 25, 2009 10:32 pm

Troopa Daisy wrote:
Try and give the clone a bit more protection.
Agreed, other that that I like it more than V2. Wink
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Re: Bowling For Droids (GBuild)

Post by Gerrard on Sun Oct 25, 2009 10:33 pm

Pyro Hawk wrote:
Troopa Daisy wrote:
Try and give the clone a bit more protection.
Agreed, other that that I like it more than V2. Wink

But this is the V2. Wink
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Post by Cyrus on Sun Oct 25, 2009 11:01 pm

Oh, sorry I ment V1. Embarassed
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Re: Bowling For Droids (GBuild)

Post by Alpha on Sun Oct 25, 2009 11:08 pm

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No floor detail, just a blank spot with 2 or 3 tiles?

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Re: Bowling For Droids (GBuild)

Post by Gerrard on Sun Oct 25, 2009 11:19 pm

Alph, it's a hardsuit contest, not a floor detailing contest. Surprised
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Re: Bowling For Droids (GBuild)

Post by Alpha on Sun Oct 25, 2009 11:27 pm

And it also says that it needs a display base, not a baseplate with a couple bricks, even though that is equivalent to a display base.

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Re: Bowling For Droids (GBuild)

Post by Gerrard on Sun Oct 25, 2009 11:32 pm

Yes, but the main focus is the hardsuit.
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Re: Bowling For Droids (GBuild)

Post by Ham701 on Mon Oct 26, 2009 12:25 am

To be honest with you, we aren't living in the Legoboy Universe here. Droids can actually shoot guns accurately, and that clone is a sitting duck. He's far too exposed to enemy fire, and would be dead in a flash. Hardsuits are meant to give nearly full body protection except the head, so that only a sniper or a bloody lucky shot could kill the trooper, without the use of heavy weapons.

Also, in an Anti-climatic end, the display needs some work. Wink
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Re: Bowling For Droids (GBuild)

Post by Gerrard on Mon Oct 26, 2009 2:15 am

Good point, though this hard suit stands a good 7-8 or times there size, and as I said above from the angle I took the picture it looks really open, though it is not as open as it seems. And why mention Legoboy? Hola Wow!
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Re: Bowling For Droids (GBuild)

Post by CloneCommandoXion on Mon Oct 26, 2009 2:21 am

The trooper is way too exposed to enemy fire, another improvement would be to make a shielded cockpit. Also the shape of the mech is a little bit chunky and it's angles are quite confusing. Wink
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Re: Bowling For Droids (GBuild)

Post by Rook on Mon Oct 26, 2009 1:52 pm

Ah that's funny! I wish you would have added more detail to the side walls. Sad

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Re: Bowling For Droids (GBuild)

Post by Nocturne on Mon Oct 26, 2009 8:57 pm

If this is a bowling ally, shouldn't it be a bit longer and there would be a ball? But good work non the less.
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Re: Bowling For Droids (GBuild)

Post by 80-0 on Mon Oct 26, 2009 9:03 pm

The ball is the doubled-over battle droid.


What that mech needs is some greebles! A spiny Tac-like rollbar-esque cover over the clone would work swimmingly in my opinion.

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Re: Bowling For Droids (GBuild)

Post by Gerrard on Mon Oct 26, 2009 9:04 pm

I guess I could edit one last part. Wink
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