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80th legion starfighter

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Post by Knight Sun Nov 29, 2009 9:22 pm

Just a 45 minute moc, and a starfighter for my legion.

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Post by Alpha Sun Nov 29, 2009 9:25 pm

The front of the starfighter needs to be straightened out, and you should use less slopes near the cockpit.

Not bad, though.
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Post by Knight Sun Nov 29, 2009 9:27 pm

Alpha wrote:The front of the starfighter needs to be straightened out, and you should use less slopes near the cockpit.

Not bad, though.

Thanks alpha, this was a really differant build than my other ships, so I thought it came out pretty well.
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Post by Cyrus Sun Nov 29, 2009 9:57 pm

It's pretty good, but it shouldn't have all those slopes leading to the engine. Man you need a flickr account so it's easier to comment on stuff like this! Wink
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Post by Darth Dan Tue Dec 01, 2009 12:50 am

Hey,looks nice Smile Keep up the good work Thumbs up
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Post by Gerrard Tue Dec 01, 2009 1:07 am

Not bad, though there are too many "big" pieces, but then again it is just my opinion. Razz
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Post by shadowtrooper5 Tue Dec 01, 2009 3:57 am

very good. looks more like a speeder though. good desighn.

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Post by ghosttrooper Tue Dec 01, 2009 9:26 pm

its ok. but you did build it in only 45 minutes so i'll cut you some slack. you should try to get rid of those gray pieces and replace them with white ones
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Post by (insert name here) Tue Dec 01, 2009 9:57 pm

Looks more like a closed speeder than a starfighter to me. But it's pretty good.
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Post by Troopa Daisy Tue Dec 01, 2009 11:38 pm

I like the use of the combination of white and orange. The craft looks more like a heavy speeder than a fighter to me though. Wink Smile
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Post by republic731 Sun Dec 06, 2009 12:37 am

its awsome eye popping Shocked

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