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Post by Darman Sat Jan 23, 2010 4:52 am

This is a simple 8x8 vignette showcasing the lone survior of the 213th legion trapped in the corner of a bombarded city with nothing but a mere dagger and vengeance in his mind.

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Post by Axel Sat Jan 23, 2010 5:06 am

It's not really a dagger, is it? Smile

I would've inverted the pole piece, and built some fancy sci-fi lamp on top. Also, the single grill tile next to it looks a bit out of place. The mass of grill tiles look pretty nice, although if the city was 'bombarded', maybe you should add more detailed greebles, and a few bits of debris.
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Post by Darman Sat Jan 23, 2010 5:16 am

Axel wrote:It's not really a dagger, is it? Smile

I would've inverted the pole piece, and built some fancy sci-fi lamp on top. Also, the single grill tile next to it looks a bit out of place. The mass of grill tiles look pretty nice, although if the city was 'bombarded', maybe you should add more detailed greebles, and a few bits of debris.

Its a dagger as far as you know. Thanks for all of the suggestions I don't mean to sound cheesy but your constructive criticism is really helping me out.
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