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"Pinned"
This is a simple 8x8 vignette showcasing the lone survior of the 213th legion trapped in the corner of a bombarded city with nothing but a mere dagger and vengeance in his mind.
Darman- Guild Member
- Age : 26
Location : America
Re: "Pinned"
It's not really a dagger, is it?
I would've inverted the pole piece, and built some fancy sci-fi lamp on top. Also, the single grill tile next to it looks a bit out of place. The mass of grill tiles look pretty nice, although if the city was 'bombarded', maybe you should add more detailed greebles, and a few bits of debris.
I would've inverted the pole piece, and built some fancy sci-fi lamp on top. Also, the single grill tile next to it looks a bit out of place. The mass of grill tiles look pretty nice, although if the city was 'bombarded', maybe you should add more detailed greebles, and a few bits of debris.
Axel- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 29
Location : Australia
Re: "Pinned"
Axel wrote:It's not really a dagger, is it?
I would've inverted the pole piece, and built some fancy sci-fi lamp on top. Also, the single grill tile next to it looks a bit out of place. The mass of grill tiles look pretty nice, although if the city was 'bombarded', maybe you should add more detailed greebles, and a few bits of debris.
Its a dagger as far as you know. Thanks for all of the suggestions I don't mean to sound cheesy but your constructive criticism is really helping me out.
Darman- Guild Member
- Age : 26
Location : America
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