Who did this?

I was bored so I made this random little vignette(?). Anyways, Commander Fox and his security troops are on Raxus Prime for no apparent reason on a search and rescue patrol after a battle; when they came across a trail of blood and some human bones. They stare and wonder
"Who did this?"

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Thanks!

THE BUTLER DID IT!

No, not really. Nice job!

He obviously asked for some free BAPs.

This moc is beutifuly wonderful but WHO DID IT?

Very good MOC, I like how you used Fox as he isn't in many MOCs outside of the Coruscant. I love how the bloods dripping dowan and how only part of the remains are there unlike most people who just put a skelie and maybe a little blood, but this show that something evil and porbably hugry is lurking on Raxus Prime. Poor
guy




Koalaexpert

Colonel Mustard. In the Hall. With.......A HERRING!

It's a great honor to receive the Dane Cook Comedian of the Year award, I know.

This is quite a simple yet good MOC. Although I would say it looks more like on Mygeeto than Raxus Prime. Raxus Prime would be way more junkyardish.

^I just called it Raxus Prime because of the "dirt" colored plates.

Thanks for the comments everyone!

Work on your details! This is not good for Guild Level member. We expect more from you. Don't get me wrong at first glance I loved it. But there are just a lot of issues that you should avoid.

See below:



1. Unfinished debris.
2. Angled piece off of space thus creating over hang. Therefore looks sloppy.
3. Minifigures feet are actually lower then the ground surface level.
4. Random grate piece used at the bottom of MOC then covered suggests lack of planning/design.
5. Skull seems to be floating.

Now that Rook has pointed these things out, it doesn't look as good as it did before he pointed them out. That said, it is still quite a good MOC.

Was it professor plum, in the billiard room, with the pistol?

Ok, I admit I did it! Just kidding. It looks good, other then what Rook pointed out.

Jeese, it was a tablescrap guys.

bl*c wrote:Jeese, it was a tablescrap guys.

You didn't declare it as a tablescrap in the original post and if so why post it at all? Not everything you will build is worth a post.
Declaring something as a "tablescrap" after the fact because someone leaves some constructive criticism is a lame cover and sounds like an excuse.
Quality over quantity.

/end rant

bl*c's original post wrote:I was bored so I made this random little vignette(?).

I thought that would cover it, sorry. I know I've learned my lesson.

Thanks for helping me out though Halen & Rook.

Wow, tough crowd to please.

Still, this isn't too bad, Rook shows good points, but now take his points, and post an update.

Alpha Beta wrote:Wow, tough crowd to please.

This is the "Builders Guild". We make better builders using fire and ice.

Ahhh! Enigmabadger what have those banned BA forum members done to you?
Nah! Just kidding It was good, untill Rook pointed out the faults, needs just a little more work.

B.Y.O.B wrote:Ahhh! Enigmabadger what have those banned BA forum members done to you?
Nah! Just kidding It was good, untill Rook pointed out the faults, needs just a little more work.

Wait, Bl*c is Enigmabadger!

@Rook: I know that expectations are high, sorry if I seemed naive.

Alpha Beta wrote:

B.Y.O.B wrote:Ahhh! Enigmabadger what have those banned BA forum members done to you?
Nah! Just kidding It was good, untill Rook pointed out the faults, needs just a little more work.

Wait, Bl*c is Enigmabadger!

Who?

Nice one word post. -R

Yes the little vig looks pretty good, until Rook pointed out a few things, but it still looks nice. I burst out into laughter when I saw it though, so nice job.

bl*c wrote:

Alpha Beta wrote:

B.Y.O.B wrote:Ahhh! Enigmabadger what have those banned BA forum members done to you?
Nah! Just kidding It was good, untill Rook pointed out the faults, needs just a little more work.

Wait, Bl*c is Enigmabadger!

Who?

Nice one word post. -R

Well who was B.Y.O.B. talking about.

First, this is :spammers:

And second, he apparently confused me with someone by the name Enigmabadger, who I am not or know of for that matter.

Rook wrote:Work on your details! This is not good for Guild Level member. We expect more from you. Don't get me wrong at first glance I loved it. But there are just a lot of issues that you should avoid.

Rook, he said he did this when he was bored. Cut him some slack...