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Assassination on Generis

Post by Ruitath on Mon May 31, 2010 4:08 pm

Here is one of my latest creations, Assassination on Generis. It was used in my CABG application (which was approved, yay!).

Generis was a high-gravity planet located in the Generis system of the Atrivis sector. It had rugged terrain and was covered with grassy plains and vast jungles.***

Prior to the formation of the Galactic Republic, the world was settled by the Rakata as part of their galaxy-spanning Infinite Empire. Following the collapse of their society, scattered temples were all that remained of their time on Generis. The planet was later settled by a mix of Humans and other species. During the Clone Wars, Generis was located within Separatist-controlled space; however, in the year 20 BBY, Generis was one of the thousands of undecided worlds that had not made an out-and-out declaration for the Republic.***

Padawan Ruitath, two clone lieutenants, and a platoon of clone troopers (36 men) have been sent to Generis to convince the human-run government to join the Republic. Generis would serve as a great launching point to take all the planets in confederacy-controlled space. Although, the Confederacy received word of the young jedi's mission and shot down their shuttle, leaving them in the dense jungle. On top of a tree sits a lone B1 Battle Sniper Droid, ready to take out the three leaders quickly. The droid calmly adjusts its E-5s sniper rifle. Little does Ruitath and his men know, they are walking into a trap.

*** = First and Second paragraphs are from various articles on Wookieepedia.

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C&C always welcome.

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Casey a.k.a. Ruitath
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Re: Assassination on Generis

Post by Darth Yoda on Mon May 31, 2010 5:07 pm

Great job Casey, this looks fantastic...

I'm looking forward to your future builds. Wink
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Re: Assassination on Generis

Post by stormtroopertj on Mon May 31, 2010 5:12 pm

So, it's a high gravity planet, boy that must be hard to walk there!
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Re: Assassination on Generis

Post by C. Fero on Mon May 31, 2010 6:38 pm

Love it! Very creative and a very good looking diorama you got! Wink Fordo Yo!
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Re: Assassination on Generis

Post by Darman on Mon May 31, 2010 9:36 pm

The Moc is looking great my favorite part for sure is the water effect, I'm a little confused though. How can you post a Moc if your Cabg application has not been accepted, is it some glitch and the reason your post is reported?
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Re: Assassination on Generis

Post by bl*c on Mon May 31, 2010 10:10 pm

It took a long time to load, but it was worth it! I love the stream, especially where the rock is, and the terrain is great! Good job! Smile Thumbs up
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Re: Assassination on Generis

Post by TennisMaster on Mon May 31, 2010 10:16 pm

Thats really cool, I like it alot.
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Re: Assassination on Generis

Post by Zepher on Mon May 31, 2010 10:29 pm

Reading is fun Darmen.

Ruitath wrote:Here is one of my latest creations, Assassination on Generis. It was used in my CABG application (which was approved, yay!).

Decent MOC. The rocks are nice, and the water is well done, but it doesn't really feel organic. The river is straight and the grass is too odly spaced, and too far apart, to really have an effect. There is also a lack of a interest point in the MOC. I think that trhe techniques are all good though. Maybe next time make it smaller, since there's too much wasted empty space to distract from what's really good about this MOC. I really like the rocks!
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Re: Assassination on Generis

Post by Troopa Daisy on Tue Jun 01, 2010 12:44 am

Very nice but still a bit plain. And maybe spread the sprout pieces out so they don't look so methodical. Wink Smile
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Re: Assassination on Generis

Post by DarthMM on Mon Jun 21, 2010 10:07 am

very amazing!Keep up the good work! Smile

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Re: Assassination On Generis

Post by rc-1798 on Mon Jun 21, 2010 3:51 pm

Looks great! ^^ Work on your capitalization please, and Zepher I think you spelled tree wrong.

-Please focus on the topic at hand, and also don't mini-mod. That's what we're there for. Wink -PhiMa
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