Assassination on Generis

Here is one of my latest creations, Assassination on Generis. It was used in my CABG application (which was approved, yay!).

Generis was a high-gravity planet located in the Generis system of the Atrivis sector. It had rugged terrain and was covered with grassy plains and vast jungles.***

Prior to the formation of the Galactic Republic, the world was settled by the Rakata as part of their galaxy-spanning Infinite Empire. Following the collapse of their society, scattered temples were all that remained of their time on Generis. The planet was later settled by a mix of Humans and other species. During the Clone Wars, Generis was located within Separatist-controlled space; however, in the year 20 BBY, Generis was one of the thousands of undecided worlds that had not made an out-and-out declaration for the Republic.***

Padawan Ruitath, two clone lieutenants, and a platoon of clone troopers (36 men) have been sent to Generis to convince the human-run government to join the Republic. Generis would serve as a great launching point to take all the planets in confederacy-controlled space. Although, the Confederacy received word of the young jedi's mission and shot down their shuttle, leaving them in the dense jungle. On top of a tree sits a lone B1 Battle Sniper Droid, ready to take out the three leaders quickly. The droid calmly adjusts its E-5s sniper rifle. Little does Ruitath and his men know, they are walking into a trap.

*** = First and Second paragraphs are from various articles on Wookieepedia.

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C&C always welcome.

Thanks,
Casey a.k.a. Ruitath

Great job Casey, this looks fantastic...

I'm looking forward to your future builds.

So, it's a high gravity planet, boy that must be hard to walk there!

Love it! Very creative and a very good looking diorama you got!

The Moc is looking great my favorite part for sure is the water effect, I'm a little confused though. How can you post a Moc if your Cabg application has not been accepted, is it some glitch and the reason your post is reported?

It took a long time to load, but it was worth it! I love the stream, especially where the rock is, and the terrain is great! Good job!

Thats really cool, I like it alot.

Reading is fun Darmen.

Ruitath wrote:Here is one of my latest creations, Assassination on Generis. It was used in my CABG application (which was approved, yay!).

Decent MOC. The rocks are nice, and the water is well done, but it doesn't really feel organic. The river is straight and the grass is too odly spaced, and too far apart, to really have an effect. There is also a lack of a interest point in the MOC. I think that trhe techniques are all good though. Maybe next time make it smaller, since there's too much wasted empty space to distract from what's really good about this MOC. I really like the rocks!

Very nice but still a bit plain. And maybe spread the sprout pieces out so they don't look so methodical.

very amazing!Keep up the good work!

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Looks great! ^^ Work on your capitalization please, and Zepher I think you spelled tree wrong.

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