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Coruscant Raid - CABGOII Ph. II Entry

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Coruscant Raid - CABGOII Ph. II Entry

Post by TheMissingPiece on Thu Jun 24, 2010 4:15 pm

Here it is, my 16x16 bignette containing a clone trooper.

After being informed of a possible Separatist hideout on Coruscant, Jedi Master Thi Missen took a squad of Clone Commandos and a platoon of Clone Troopers to the building and discovered a Separatist base!

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Re: Coruscant Raid - CABGOII Ph. II Entry

Post by bl*c on Thu Jun 24, 2010 4:20 pm

Not a big fan of the table, but the floor and the detailed door & door area are great! Smile
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Post by Troopa Daisy on Thu Jun 24, 2010 4:45 pm

The door and floor is nice, but the wall looks kind of odd and that big thing in the middle seems to be in the way. Wink Smile
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Re: Coruscant Raid - CABGOII Ph. II Entry

Post by droidbait on Thu Jun 24, 2010 5:41 pm

I like the effect of the droid being blasted back by the clone, but DP TD is right the table is kinda in the way.
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Re: Coruscant Raid - CABGOII Ph. II Entry

Post by Alpha Beta on Thu Jun 24, 2010 6:05 pm

It is ok, but it needs something that gives it a *wow* factor.
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Post by bl*c on Thu Jun 24, 2010 7:08 pm

Is it me, or have you been writing that in your last few days of commenting? :P
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Re: Coruscant Raid - CABGOII Ph. II Entry

Post by Alpha Beta on Fri Jun 25, 2010 12:12 am

^Ya, pretty much. Razz I just like to see one in a moc, whether it be as little as a bad @ss clone, or as big as a epic tank.
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Post by Jedi Joe on Fri Jun 25, 2010 5:25 am

Wow, very nice! I really have no complaints. Congrats, I know for sure you'll make it to Phase III... Wink
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Post by Sergeant B on Fri Jun 25, 2010 6:33 am

Very impressive, I actually like the table but maybe if you put like some sort of a seperatist leader in there with some plans on the table would add a little more story into it. Still, that is definately going to get you into phase III, good work!

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Post by Rabid Squirrel on Fri Jun 25, 2010 6:35 am

I very much like this MOC, mostly because of the table. I like the SNOT on it, but you could have made it better. Good Luck on getting to Phase Three. I see it will be a fight for the finish from the entries so far.
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Re: Coruscant Raid - CABGOII Ph. II Entry

Post by TheMissingPiece on Fri Jun 25, 2010 4:02 pm

Thanks for the comments, everyone! I really appreciate it!
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Nice vignette

Post by bladerunner on Mon Jun 28, 2010 11:30 pm

Nice vignette, but doesn't the droid hanging over the base-plate make it bigger than 16*16? (or whatever)
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Re: Coruscant Raid - CABGOII Ph. II Entry

Post by TheMissingPiece on Mon Jun 28, 2010 11:36 pm

Nope. Overhang doesn't count in vignettes.
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Re: Coruscant Raid - CABGOII Ph. II Entry

Post by Alpha Beta on Tue Jun 29, 2010 12:27 am

Just wondering, wouldn't it match more if you used a grey baseplate instead of a green one?
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Re: Coruscant Raid - CABGOII Ph. II Entry

Post by TheMissingPiece on Tue Jun 29, 2010 12:28 am

I don't have one myself. Razz Is there one?
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Re: Coruscant Raid - CABGOII Ph. II Entry

Post by Bossk on Tue Jun 29, 2010 1:37 am

I like this set up, especially the Droid getting dismembered by the Jedi and the nice door. That said, I think the table has room for improvement.
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Re: Coruscant Raid - CABGOII Ph. II Entry

Post by Alpha Beta on Wed Jun 30, 2010 12:58 am

TheMissingPiece wrote:I don't have one myself. Razz Is there one?

Ya, I have 2 of them. Razz
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