10th Legion D-Wing Class Starfighter

So this is probably my best MOC to date.

But I wouldn't mind getting some feeback on this. I know their are some things to fix but that's what C@C is for! Thanks!

10th Legion D-Wing Class Starfighter



Better look at the wings.


Better look at the center of the starfighter.


Weapons on top.


Double wings, hence the "D-Wing."


Bottom of the wing.


Center of the bottom.


Picture of back.



Thanks and enjoy!

Sorry but the jagged edges and bumps on the starfighter don't do it for me sorry. I see you tried to use SNOT though, that's good.

I don't like the SNOT hanging off the wings, the rest is good though.

The second pair of wings looks strange to me. I also don't like those 4 tiles that hang over the edge on the wings and the front.

The rest is really cool. I can just see myself swooshing it.

It looks to messy and just not right. And like bl*c said the double wings just don't fit.

I love it. It reminds me of Nim's fighter of Jedi Starfighter.

Meh, it's okay. It's too jagged and the tiles hanging off the edge are weird. Like Bl*c said, the double wings are not looking too great. Maybe you could improve the cockpit a bit?

danester man wrote:It looks to messy and just not right. And like bl*c said the double wings just don't fit.

Danestar, you know, why don't you post what I could improve on?

And yes, I will update this.

I'd say it's pretty awesome! I'm amazed!

Try putting the second(bottom)wings upside down so it will be one large wing, and it would flow better.

Really!? You've done better. Do you want my detailed feedback?

Rook wrote:Really!? You've done better. Do you want my detailed feedback?

Can I get it in a pm? Thanks.

This is my first MOC in 3 months, cut me some slack.

You should have learned by now slack and Cabg don't go together in the same sentence unless it is something about fishing.

Darman wrote:You should have learned by now slack and Cabg don't go together in the same sentence unless it is something about fishing.

Maybe I was fishing.

Oh and V2 is coming soon. Just waiting for Rook's comments. *gulp*

Wait, is this for our guild build thing?

bl*c wrote:Wait, is this for our guild build thing?

Yes, but I am going to update it, so it's not actually entered yet.

Gerrard wrote:

bl*c wrote:Wait, is this for our guild build thing?

Yes, but I am going to update it, so it's not actually entered yet.

Just making sure, I started to build a tank when I remembered we changed it to starfighter. :d'oh:

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1. Awkward dip between guns and wing.
2. Dark red piece hanging out into mid air.
3. Nice tail like pieces but I'd build up the bottom more. Make them look more fuel cells on a earth fighter jet.
4. Invert sloped piece pull back a stud or two so they are even. Then greeble the space along the front of the wing between the two slopes.
5. Slope the whole wing down about 5-15% with hinges and it’ll have a move aggressive bird like look. Kind of like some of the SG1 ships.

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1. Sloped pieces are really jumbled. Use more rather then spacing them apart with the 2x2 rounds with the smooth bottoms. Then maybe cover the bottom of the slopes with those rounds instead.
2. I'm never a big fan of leaving pieces open like this. It's a space ship cover up the gaps.

Thanks Rook! I will definitely be updating this!