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Republic Water World Patrol Ship (Mk.I)

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Republic Water World Patrol Ship (Mk.I)

Post by bl*c on Wed Aug 18, 2010 8:01 pm

The Republic WWP-S was a ship used for patrol on water worlds such as Kamino and Mon Calamari. It's curved body allowed rain to easily slide off. Though it wasn't used in action much, it was equiped with twin cannons, an astromech droid, and had a cargo area as well.

My entry for my challenge with Gerrard: Build any kind of SWU Starfighter.
All in all, I only like the bit seen in the first pic; I rushed, which is why the rest is crap. =/ The title says "(Mk.I)" because it will get an update soon,
but not in time for the challenge. I hope you enjoy it.







Thanks! C&C appreciated. Smile

P.S I have no idea how it can fly. Razz
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Re: Republic Water World Patrol Ship (Mk.I)

Post by Rook on Wed Aug 18, 2010 8:08 pm

It's Star Wars. Repulsor lifts. Wow this thing looks

Ok here it is:

1. Flip cockpit around and part in front of cockpit.
2. Increase wing size slightly.
3. Angle wings down slightly.



Bonus: Add rockets to bottom of wings! Fire in the HOLE! Wow this thing looks


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Re: Republic Water World Patrol Ship (Mk.I)

Post by bl*c on Wed Aug 18, 2010 8:14 pm

OK, thanks. I've got it form here Doctor.
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Re: Republic Water World Patrol Ship (Mk.I)

Post by ^Ninja Trooper^ on Wed Aug 18, 2010 8:50 pm

Rook wrote:It's Star Wars. Repulsor lifts. Wow this thing looks

Ok here it is:

1. Flip cockpit around and part in front of cockpit.
2. Increase wing size slightly.
3. Angle wings down slightly.

(snip)

Bonus: Add rockets to bottom of wings! Fire in the HOLE! Wow this thing looks

Aw, Rook beat me to it.! Razz

I like the design, it flows pretty well. If you do decide to change any of it, add some thrusters while your at it. Smile
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Re: Republic Water World Patrol Ship (Mk.I)

Post by Guest on Wed Aug 18, 2010 9:09 pm

Looks nice, but wings definitely need to be bigger.

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Re: Republic Water World Patrol Ship (Mk.I)

Post by Rijulskywalker on Wed Aug 18, 2010 10:22 pm

I actually like it, but do what Rook said. Also, maybe tiling the top Dark Red studs would look nice?
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Re: Republic Water World Patrol Ship (Mk.I)

Post by Alpha Beta on Wed Aug 18, 2010 10:26 pm

Its great, but the wings should be in the center of the ship. Wink
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Re: Republic Water World Patrol Ship (Mk.I)

Post by N8 on Wed Aug 18, 2010 10:50 pm

I like the choice of pieces. Like what The_Customizer said, the wings are small. IMO, It should be a dropship, not a patrol ship. Good Job.


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Re: Republic Water World Patrol Ship (Mk.I)

Post by Gerrard on Wed Aug 18, 2010 10:52 pm

Pretty good! I agree with Rook's tips though. Otherwise, a very good quality MOC! Wink
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Re: Republic Water World Patrol Ship (Mk.I)

Post by bl*c on Wed Aug 18, 2010 11:02 pm

^Ninja Trooper^ wrote:If you do decide to change any of it, add some thrusters while your at it. Smile
I was thinking about that. Wink

Thanks for the comments guys! Smile
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Re: Republic Water World Patrol Ship (Mk.I)

Post by Troopa Daisy on Thu Aug 19, 2010 6:09 am

Gerrard wrote:Pretty good! I agree with Rook's tips though. Otherwise, a very good quality MOC! Wink

Yes I also agree with Rook's tips. Although also when enlarging the wing, make it sloped from the body to the wing too. Wink Smile
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Re: Republic Water World Patrol Ship (Mk.I)

Post by blackninjatom on Fri Aug 20, 2010 11:25 pm

It's definitely a good model, but add Rook's suggestions and it will be a very good model. Pilot
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Re: Republic Water World Patrol Ship (Mk.I)

Post by Knight on Sat Aug 21, 2010 2:22 am

Do what Rook says, and try to get rid of the black technic pins on the side. Maybe make the forward guns a bit shorter too. Other than that, this is one of my favorite MOC's by you. Smile
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Re: Republic Water World Patrol Ship (Mk.I)

Post by bl*c on Sat Aug 21, 2010 2:25 am

That means a lot you three, especially since you're some of the best builders here! Wow this thing looks
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Re: Republic Water World Patrol Ship (Mk.I)

Post by Commander Balmer on Thu Oct 14, 2010 5:32 am

It will be good to see the updated version because Rook's tips are definitely right. I also like the pilot.


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