Republic Water World Patrol Ship (Mk.I)
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Gerrard
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Republic Water World Patrol Ship (Mk.I)
The Republic WWP-S was a ship used for patrol on water worlds such as Kamino and Mon Calamari. It's curved body allowed rain to easily slide off. Though it wasn't used in action much, it was equiped with twin cannons, an astromech droid, and had a cargo area as well.
My entry for my challenge with Gerrard: Build any kind of SWU Starfighter.
All in all, I only like the bit seen in the first pic; I rushed, which is why the rest is crap. =/ The title says "(Mk.I)" because it will get an update soon,
but not in time for the challenge. I hope you enjoy it.
Thanks! C&C appreciated.
P.S I have no idea how it can fly.
My entry for my challenge with Gerrard: Build any kind of SWU Starfighter.
All in all, I only like the bit seen in the first pic; I rushed, which is why the rest is crap. =/ The title says "(Mk.I)" because it will get an update soon,
but not in time for the challenge. I hope you enjoy it.
Thanks! C&C appreciated.
P.S I have no idea how it can fly.
Re: Republic Water World Patrol Ship (Mk.I)
It's Star Wars. Repulsor lifts.
Ok here it is:
1. Flip cockpit around and part in front of cockpit.
2. Increase wing size slightly.
3. Angle wings down slightly.
Bonus: Add rockets to bottom of wings! Fire in the HOLE!
Ok here it is:
1. Flip cockpit around and part in front of cockpit.
2. Increase wing size slightly.
3. Angle wings down slightly.
Bonus: Add rockets to bottom of wings! Fire in the HOLE!
Last edited by Rook on Wed Aug 18, 2010 8:14 pm; edited 1 time in total
Re: Republic Water World Patrol Ship (Mk.I)
Rook wrote:It's Star Wars. Repulsor lifts.
Ok here it is:
1. Flip cockpit around and part in front of cockpit.
2. Increase wing size slightly.
3. Angle wings down slightly.
(snip)
Bonus: Add rockets to bottom of wings! Fire in the HOLE!
Aw, Rook beat me to it.!
I like the design, it flows pretty well. If you do decide to change any of it, add some thrusters while your at it.
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Re: Republic Water World Patrol Ship (Mk.I)
Looks nice, but wings definitely need to be bigger.
Guest- Guest
Re: Republic Water World Patrol Ship (Mk.I)
I actually like it, but do what Rook said. Also, maybe tiling the top Dark Red studs would look nice?
Rijulskywalker- Guild Member
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Re: Republic Water World Patrol Ship (Mk.I)
Its great, but the wings should be in the center of the ship.
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Re: Republic Water World Patrol Ship (Mk.I)
I like the choice of pieces. Like what The_Customizer said, the wings are small. IMO, It should be a dropship, not a patrol ship. Good Job.
Last edited by N8 on Thu Aug 19, 2010 6:19 pm; edited 1 time in total
Re: Republic Water World Patrol Ship (Mk.I)
Pretty good! I agree with Rook's tips though. Otherwise, a very good quality MOC!
Re: Republic Water World Patrol Ship (Mk.I)
I was thinking about that.^Ninja Trooper^ wrote:If you do decide to change any of it, add some thrusters while your at it.
Thanks for the comments guys!
Re: Republic Water World Patrol Ship (Mk.I)
Gerrard wrote:Pretty good! I agree with Rook's tips though. Otherwise, a very good quality MOC!
Yes I also agree with Rook's tips. Although also when enlarging the wing, make it sloped from the body to the wing too.
Re: Republic Water World Patrol Ship (Mk.I)
It's definitely a good model, but add Rook's suggestions and it will be a very good model.
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Do what Rook says, and try to get rid of the black technic pins on the side. Maybe make the forward guns a bit shorter too. Other than that, this is one of my favorite MOC's by you.
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Re: Republic Water World Patrol Ship (Mk.I)
That means a lot you three, especially since you're some of the best builders here!
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It will be good to see the updated version because Rook's tips are definitely right. I also like the pilot.
Please don't post in old topics. -Tac
Please don't post in old topics. -Tac
Last edited by Tac on Thu Oct 14, 2010 7:11 am; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : Bad grammar)
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