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LK arms M15 pistol.

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LK arms M15 pistol.

Post by Commander Lukas on Wed Jan 26, 2011 3:54 pm

Select fire pistol by fictional American gunsmith LK arms.
Rate of Fire: 650-700 rpm
range: 50-80 meters
Mag capacity: 20






Black-Safety
Yellow- semi
Red-auto

I gotta go, more to come later.
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Post by ^Ninja Trooper^ on Wed Jan 26, 2011 9:25 pm

I'll be blunt with you Lukas. It looks like a tower of bricks with a couple groves here and there. I know you can do better. Wink
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Post by Tac on Wed Jan 26, 2011 9:56 pm

It looks like something an 8 year old would build and play with. The only redeeming bit was the SNOTed colours, but then I saw it was just pen. Sad
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Post by clonetexascompany on Thu Jan 27, 2011 12:48 am

Man I made a pistol solely out of 2x4 grey bricks and it still came out better than that. It wasn't great. Thumbs down
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Post by Wickedskillz on Thu Jan 27, 2011 12:49 am

Yeah, I agree with the posts above. It looks like a tower of bricks. Maybe try adding more shape?
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Post by Rabid Squirrel on Thu Jan 27, 2011 1:10 am

Maybe try sloping the handle? I don't know Lukas, this isn't your best work. :/

It would be a little cooler if you had it on a plain white background, because the way you made it, makes it look like something someone posted in a hurry on MOCPages. If the red, yellow, and black were SNOT, like TAC said, it would be cool, but it' just pen. Look for new, creative ways to make average things extraordinary. That's why I always make a mech, and use the same frame over and over again, is because I discover something new that I need to try or want to see how it turns out. I hope my opinion helps!

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Post by Justin Pyne on Thu Jan 27, 2011 1:55 am

I'm not very fond of the standard L-shape of the gun. If the handle was curved more and the barrel was smoothed out or elongated; it would look better. Also, try building it with bricks instead of plates so the bottom and top aren't just full of studs. Wink
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Post by Denal on Thu Jan 27, 2011 2:31 am

Alright, after looking through this I think I have an idea! I may confuse you on some cases, but I'll try and get down a point.
I'll start with the top portion cause that might be the easiest to fix. Perhaps you could use more plates instead of bricks to get a shape going. Using cheese slopes on the edge on bothe sides can work out as well. Then you can tile the top.
Now for the handle. Not sure how I can fix that memory-wise, but it would look better at an angle.


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Post by Troopa Daisy on Thu Jan 27, 2011 2:34 am

Eh could have been done better. Maybe rounded the gun, the top could be SNOT, etc. Wink
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Post by Commander Lukas on Thu Jan 27, 2011 2:37 am

May a MOD move this to the WIP, section, please?
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Post by Rijulskywalker on Fri Jan 28, 2011 5:50 am

Funny, you posted this just when I finished my SOCOM - ish pistol. Like others said, this can be improved. And don't use tape.
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