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Assault on Rhen Var 3.1

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Assault on Rhen Var 3.1

Post by 1 Million Watts of Power on Sun Jan 30, 2011 9:56 pm

Built for Justin's group on Flickr. Smile







"It was death when we dropped in. Droids all around. There wasn't a safe spot in sight. Hard to believe I made it out..."
-Watts

Told from sergeant Watts's point of view.

Objective- "316th: The Venator Titan is being hit hard by Confederate guns. It is obvious now that the CIS is present on the system and do not intend to have anyone slip by. Unfortunately, the Hangars are full of artillery and walkers. There are no airborne vehicles to evacuate the destroyer. You'll need to drop through the secondary Hangar bay and land in the trenches of the forward command post."
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Re: Assault on Rhen Var 3.1

Post by N8 on Sun Jan 30, 2011 10:47 pm

It's a little plain. Try adding a little more 'landscape'.
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Re: Assault on Rhen Var 3.1

Post by Troopa Daisy on Mon Jan 31, 2011 2:38 am

The use of all the long tiles next to each other doesn't really give it the "snow" effect. It would be better if you used studs that were layered. Wink
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Re: Assault on Rhen Var 3.1

Post by train 01 on Mon Jan 31, 2011 8:52 pm

It's a little plain as others have said. My biggest issue, though, is that the clones don't have any cover so it just looks like they're going to get killed. I do like the trench, just add more cover.
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Re: Assault on Rhen Var 3.1

Post by Wickedskillz on Tue Feb 01, 2011 12:26 am

I like the trench a lot, but I do think the Clones require more cover. Maybe one clone could be sitting down and facing backwards on the wall, to show that taking cover is possible.
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