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Post by Bizzle on Mon Jun 20, 2011 11:47 pm







The year is 2048 war is raging in Asia. The North Koreans and the Chinese have formed an alliance, The NKCA (North Korean Chinese Alliance), with plans to conquer all of Asia, once and for all forcing the Americans and NATO out of Asia. Due to superior technology outcome of the war is leaning towards the NKCA. With the invention of the Armored Attack Drone less and less NKCA soldiers are being lost every every day.

US Marines and NATO SpecOps struggle to an outpost in Taiwan against a A.A.D. with only a handful of HE Anti Drone mines left their only hope is the sniper in position behind them on top of the ridge, armed with explosive anti armor rounds.


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Re: Holdout

Post by C.J.Cutrone9 on Tue Jun 21, 2011 1:58 am

Love the backstory on this Bizzle. My favorite thing is the sandbag. I have tried several methods to no avail.
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Re: Holdout

Post by Kilo on Tue Jun 21, 2011 2:55 am

The backstory is better than anything I could do. I'd like to see one of those armored attack drones if you haven't already built one and I've just missed it.
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Post by train 01 on Tue Jun 21, 2011 5:24 pm

Kilo wrote:The backstory is better than anything I could do. I'd like to see one of those armored attack drones if you haven't already built one and I've just missed it.

If you looked at his Flickr set, you would have seen it. Wink

Anyway, I really like this MOC. The sandbags are very good, and the rocks are good too.
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Re: Holdout

Post by Kilo on Tue Jun 21, 2011 8:54 pm

Oh, he he, I'm bad about looking at sets, just look at the pictures in front of me and nothing else. Apologies. Embarassed Wow this thing looks
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Re: Holdout

Post by Aerial Trooper Nitro on Tue Jun 21, 2011 9:25 pm

Nice work on the backstory, and the MOC is interesting as well. My only criticism is that the soldiers with the clone pilots torsos look out of place. The rebel commando torso you used on the leader and the sniper would look better. Other than that it looks really cool Smile.
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Re: Holdout

Post by why on Sat Jul 09, 2011 9:46 pm

Truthfully, I think you could have done better. For an MOC this small, it may be hard to put details in, but nonetheless you need to try and put more in. The sandbag was done nicely, as well as the weeds in front of it, but what about the other pieces of ground? Where is the texture to that?

On another note, your backstory was absolutely great, and would be enough to write a book out of.
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