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Stories of the Confederacy: Colateral Damage

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Stories of the Confederacy: Colateral Damage

Post by A on Thu Aug 11, 2011 4:45 pm




Here it is, my latest stop motion video...






I consider it one of my best pieces of work so far, even though at times there are lighting messups, animation hiccups, and audio issues.

C&C are wealcome.


Last edited by A on Thu Aug 11, 2011 5:59 pm; edited 3 times in total (Reason for editing : The image and youtube links were acting weird.)
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Re: Stories of the Confederacy: Colateral Damage

Post by rubik on Thu Aug 11, 2011 5:15 pm

Nope, it's not showing up.

EDIT: Great work! It seemed sort of slow though. Maybe up the frame rate?


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Post by DarthPineapple on Thu Aug 11, 2011 5:43 pm

Put the link of the video between [youtube] [/youtube] tags.
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Post by A on Thu Aug 11, 2011 5:55 pm

DarthPineapple wrote:Put the link of the video between [youtube] [/youtube] tags.



It's working now, thanks. It was weird, though in the editor window the video was showing up, but whatever it's fixed now.
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Re: Stories of the Confederacy: Colateral Damage

Post by flipnaz17 on Thu Aug 11, 2011 6:06 pm

Overall, very nice work. I have always thought that the only real "good guys" from Clone Wars Era are the average Separatist and the Jedi. That said, there are a few movements where the video seems to have too many frames. At (1:48), where he hits the clone, it's almost Matrix-slow. I suggest you clean it up a little, because it's too good not to be made "perfect". Wow this thing looks
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Post by Fithboy on Thu Aug 11, 2011 6:10 pm

Argh! This would be so awesome if you'd increased your frame rate a little. At the moment it looks like everything's in slow-mo.

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Re: Stories of the Confederacy: Colateral Damage

Post by Zepher on Thu Aug 11, 2011 6:42 pm

Music needs to be quieter, as do sound effects. Speed it up, it is painfully slow. Pictures are beautiful, and the movie seems well shot over-all.
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Post by Rook on Thu Aug 11, 2011 6:43 pm

Ah awesome. Increase speed, and therefore reduce overall time of clip, and you're golden.

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Re: Stories of the Confederacy: Colateral Damage

Post by MikeZulu on Thu Aug 11, 2011 7:01 pm

fithboy wrote:Argh! This would be so awesome if you'd increased your frame rate a little. At the moment it looks like everything's in slow-mo.

I agree, the framerate needs to be higher. Otherwise the animation is great.
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Re: Stories of the Confederacy: Colateral Damage

Post by C.J.Cutrone9 on Thu Aug 11, 2011 7:22 pm

I love the story line! The build the film was on looked great and the voice acting was awsome. But, I do think it needs to be sped up a tad bit. And if this is for Spugesdus Contest where is the requirement?
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Re: Stories of the Confederacy: Colateral Damage

Post by A on Thu Aug 11, 2011 7:36 pm

C.J.Cutrone9 wrote:I love the story line! The build the film was on looked great and the voice acting was awsome. But, I do think it needs to be sped up a tad bit. And if this is for Spugesdus Contest where is the requirement?



The requirement is when at 2:45-ish where Cad says "Don't panic ma'am. Hurry get yourselfs under cover before-".



I'm sorry it's hard to hear, audio has always been an issue; along with too many pictures or to few. Anyway, thanks for the great comments everyone!


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Re: Stories of the Confederacy: Colateral Damage

Post by Wickedskillz on Sat Aug 13, 2011 2:51 am

Nice work, but you really need to speed it up. Increase the frame-rate a bit, and you've got yourself a nice little clip.
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