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Order 99- Misread Message

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Order 99- Misread Message

Post by Commander Vulcan on Sat Sep 17, 2011 5:25 am

Hey guys, so this is my 16x16 entry for the Epic Fails Contest.

Order 99- Misread Message


After three months since the Seperatists were defeated and driven out of New Ovaron, the Republic contacts the government about possible Seperatists information left on one of their planets and wanted to send a squad of clones with a jedi to investigate. The government agreed but decided to have NOVA soldiers commanded by Vulcan guide the clones. The Republic believed the plans were on the planet of Rokva at the abandoned chemical production plant. The plant has been abandoned for over fifty years due to a failure in the computer system which caused the chemicals to reach dangerous levels of toxicity. Because the levels of the chemicals are still dangerous, all the soldiers including the jedi had to wear hazmat suits. The only way to get through most of the plant is on a bridge but the high level of the chemicals and lack of maintenance has caused the bridge to weaken and collapse in a lot of places. While walking near a drainage system, the clone officer recieved a message from the Chancellor but then part of the bridge collapsed under their feet, only the clone officer and Vulcan were able to avoid it, the rest of the soldiers fell into the chemicals, instantly killing and liquidating them. The jedi was able to grab onto the bridge but his helmet broke and let in the toxic fumes that disoriented him and made it hard to breath, all he could do was call for help once. Vulcan went over to help the jedi while the clone officer viewed the message Palpatine was sending. The message was to execute Order 66, but the clone's communicator was damaged and he thought Palpatine said Order 60, which is immediately commit suicide.



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I know the backstory is very long but you wouldn't understand what's going on without it.
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Re: Order 99- Misread Message

Post by pyro of the 19th on Sat Sep 17, 2011 6:00 pm

Love the red river and the fail!
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Re: Order 99- Misread Message

Post by Guest on Sat Sep 17, 2011 6:06 pm

"Order 60, Immediately commit suicide" Razz

Nice job on it!

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Re: Order 99- Misread Message

Post by Commander Vulcan on Sat Sep 17, 2011 9:53 pm

Thanks for the comments guys, I really appericate it.
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Re: Order 99- Misread Message

Post by Captain Flak on Mon Sep 19, 2011 12:27 am

Wow, this is really good, you have improved a lot!
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