The Taris Offensive

Retrieval


"Squad 1 report!

"This is Squad one we have recovered the capsule, returning to the rendezvous point eta 5 minutes"

Captured


"Squad 2 report"

"This is squad 2 we have successfully captured the cities anti- air and tank defenses you may begin the attack."

" Very good, now  hold those guns until reinforcements arrive."

"Affirmative!"

Countdown


"Sir We've found the bomb its in the city center."

"Very good, stay hidden and wait for reinforcements"

"Negative sir the droids have activated the detonator we've got ten minutes until this entire city is blown to pieces"

"Bomb squad is en route, eta 5 minutes"

" Affirmative, we'll clear a path"


(blaster fire, clone screams)


"This is Falcon we've reached the bomb sight there is no sign of squad 3"

"Countdown shows 2 minutes left"

Affirmative, approaching the bomb it appears to be unguarded."

"Proceed with caution"

" Affirmi...wait what was that...AMBUSH!"

(blaster fire coms go dead)

Falcon: "Stang, I should of known it was a trap, nothing would be that easy!"

Breaker: "Sir get to the bomb I'll cover you!"

(Falcon runs towards the bomb, rips off the access panel)


///Countdown\\\

5....

4....

3....

2....

kshkzzzzzzzz........


(the countdown stops as Falcon cuts the red wire)



Industrial District


[RECEIVING TRANSMISSION ]

".........Attention all units a bounty hunter has just stolen crucial information from the forward command center. That information can not be allowed to fall into enemy hands eliminate him and retrieve the data at all costs!"

[LUCKY'S LOG]

" This is CT-18-6497 my squad is being over run in the Industrial District, we need immediate reinforcements!"
.......
"Stang! General Thel is down I repeat Jedi General Thel has been wounded we must fall back!"

" Negative, CT-18-6497 you must hold your ground."

" With all due respect sir we need to pull out of the industrial district and regroup before more of my men die."

" Don't worry CT-18-6497 an aerial attack squad has been dispatched and are on their way to assist you."

"Sir thzzzzzzzzzzz.........."

[TRANSMISSION LOST]


[GREEN TWO'S LOG]

" This is Green two I've located the bounty hunter deep within the industrial district I am awaiting permission to engage"

"Affirmative Green two you may engage, shoot to kill!"

[END LOG]

Afternath


[CT-98-2435's LOG]


"The Separatist left the system 2 days ago leaving all of their droids deactivated and useless. At the moment the only threats are small pockets of the local militia but they are loosing ground fast I expect the campaign to be over with in the next couple rotations...
"


[END LOG]

These are some interesting and excellent builds! I really like your roads, the mix of SNOT and exposed studs is really effective. The structure in the corner of Countdown is very cool, I'd like to see you build larger parts of buildings.

Fantastic work! That cannon is very impressive stuff, even though I can't see all of it, I know it's super detailed.

Fithboy wrote:These are some interesting and excellent builds! I really like your roads, the mix of SNOT and exposed studs is really effective. The structure in the corner of Countdown is very cool, I'd like to see you build larger parts of buildings.

This, You seem to build really good corners, I'd like to see a whole building.

Yeah, as we discussed in your Guild app, we're quite impressed with your building techniques, especially with the detailing. Looking forward to seeing some good builds from you.

I really like the 'Countdown' vignette; the street corner post is really well placed and the sign hanging is a sublime detail.

The first tablescrap is also a really nice, small eye-catcher in that the asymmetrical base really does a lot for the simplicity of the build, although I can't say I like the different colored visors (heads) that you've used under the scout helmet. Either one would be good as long as their uniform in my opinion.

Thanks for the feedback everyone!

Fithboy wrote: I'd like to see you build larger parts of buildings.

I tend to do better at smaller bits and pieces of buildings especially when build si-fi due to my limited supply of bricks that I find fitting for the theme, but who knows maybe eventually I'll try something bigger.

Clonecommando007 wrote:although I can't say I like the different colored visors (heads) that you've used under the scout helmet.  Either one would be good as long as their uniform in my opinion.

The green visor was supposed to make the officer stand out more, he also has the three olive dots to symbolize his rank but I thought he needed something more.