Rhen Var: Whiteout CHAPTER TWO
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commander crusher
Clonecommando007
Comrade Faie
The Jinja Ninja
J4ke
Commander Mongoose
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Commander Mongoose- Guild Member
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Re: Rhen Var: Whiteout CHAPTER TWO
by J4ke Sun Sep 07, 2008 10:05 pm
Woohoo, I'm famous! 
Pretty good, but does your camera have a flash? If so, use it, if not, turn all the lights on in your room. That should make it easier to see what's going on.
Pretty good, but does your camera have a flash? If so, use it, if not, turn all the lights on in your room. That should make it easier to see what's going on.
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Re: Rhen Var: Whiteout CHAPTER TWO
by The Jinja Ninja Sun Sep 07, 2008 11:08 pm
Hurrah, may the Redshirt lineage continue to die in inevitable and unspectacular ways! 
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Re: Rhen Var: Whiteout CHAPTER TWO
by Comrade Faie Sun Sep 07, 2008 11:28 pm
Crap, the AT-TE's ruined my facial! Everybody keeps on stepping on me! Good job, the storyline could use some work though. 
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Re: Rhen Var: Whiteout CHAPTER TWO
by Clonecommando007 Sun Sep 07, 2008 11:35 pm
Nice work on this one too! But the lighting is too dark, turn on the Room's lights! But I like this.
Clonecommando007- Kinda like a UFO
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Re: Rhen Var: Whiteout CHAPTER TWO
by commander crusher Mon Sep 08, 2008 12:26 am
Oh add me please. If you could.
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Re: Rhen Var: Whiteout CHAPTER TWO
by Bly Mon Sep 08, 2008 12:48 am
Commander Faie wrote:Crap, the AT-TE's ruined my facial! Everybody keeps on stepping on me! Good job, the storyline could use some work though.
You're more like the Faie Foothills than the Faie Mountains if you ask me.
Nice job Mongoose! 
Bly- Guild Member
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Re: Rhen Var: Whiteout CHAPTER TWO
by ARC CloneTrooper141 Mon Sep 08, 2008 1:34 am
Very awesome, great job! 
(five!)
(five!)
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Re: Rhen Var: Whiteout CHAPTER TWO
by major reviss Mon Sep 08, 2008 2:39 am
Oh Yeah! I killed something!
Nice comic too.
Nice comic too.
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Re: Rhen Var: Whiteout CHAPTER TWO
by thunder-clone Sat Sep 13, 2008 7:30 pm
It is good and I really like captain Redshirt,
the story is great too, nice work.
the story is great too, nice work.
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