Chapter 1 - Part 3: Streets of Despair

So I took this rookie and set off. My goal was to team up with Chad, who had to be in there somewhere. But no street, no roof was safe. Everywhere those damn brutes and turkeys.

"Chad, are you okay?" "I am, but some weren't as lucky." "Chad, get down, that's an order!" "Alright, but you should shut it too, sir! Those gorillas have perfect hearing, and 3 inches above your head stands a jackal!" "I know, what has happened to the privacy, huh?"
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Comments and Criticism are greatly appreciated. On flickr.

Wow, this is pretty amazing. I love the way you made a shattered window affect. The only thing I'm not to keen on is that round circle plate on the side of the building and the fact that you made 4 different colored brutes. 4 different colored brutes are ok but I just don't like the way those colors go together, maybe replace the red one with a white one? But hey, that's just my opinion. Over all you created an amazing build, keep up the good work.

Broken building is well done! I really like your brick aliens, nice use of custom figure there too.

Typhoon wrote:Wow, this is pretty amazing. I love the way you made a shattered window affect. The only thing I'm not to keen on is that round circle plate on the side of the building and the fact that you made 4 different colored brutes. 4 different colored brutes are ok but I just don't like the way those colors go together, maybe replace the red one with a white one? But hey, that's just my opinion. Over all you created an amazing build, keep up the good work.

I don't even know it there is a white one. This is just (from front to back) Chieftain, Ultra, Minor, General.

Legion Dude wrote:

Typhoon wrote:Wow, this is pretty amazing. I love the way you made a shattered window affect. The only thing I'm not to keen on is that round circle plate on the side of the building and the fact that you made 4 different colored brutes. 4 different colored brutes are ok but I just don't like the way those colors go together, maybe replace the red one with a white one? But hey, that's just my opinion. Over all you created an amazing build, keep up the good work.

I don't even know it there is a white one. This is just (from front to back) Chieftain, Ultra, Minor, General.

Oh. Well I don't play halo so if it was me I would just through in a white one and see if anyone noticed it was out of place.

I'm actually not really liking the colour scheme of the building its really standing out. First off, you have the sidewalk area that's light bley and the first part of the building that's light bley but then all of a sudden it becomes white and then dark bley. Try to stick to one or two colours for the building and use a different one for the street it will look much better (for example dark bley street and light bley building). Busted room though looks really good.