The Battle of Arnathas Part I
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The Battle of Arnathas Part I
After CIS Bioweapon Substance 46 was released, a strike team consisting of Arth, Viper, Malos, and Acro was sent to the surface of Arnathas. Upon arrival, they face the horrors of the once beautiful planet...
Overview of the bignette, most of the fauna, Native Species, and life have been corrupted by Substance 46, causing it to turn into dark shades of gray.
A Seperatist A3 MKII Recon Droid, equipped with 2 MPLs (Minimal Pulse Lasers) and 1 G3-A29 Electro-Wave.
Acro, collecting "water" from the polluted lake, which will help 704th BioScience Officers determine the effects of Substance 46.
The polluted lake, with all it's lifeforms dead, or mentally corrupted.
Creator's Note
I had fun making this, this was originally going to be the volcanic planet of Nanos, but I ran out of orange pieces. So then, I decided to make a marshland. There will be a Part II, most likely a Part III, and very unlikely a Part IV. And the guys in the orange suits are Arnathan Guards, who were sent to investigate the lake, but were killed by aggresive and corrupted Nanos Beasts. If you correctly translate the Aurebesh, it'll make sense. Also, I have completely lost intrest in GIMP, as it is time consuming, and it takes up spaces of the MOC. Enjoy!
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 29
Re: The Battle of Arnathas Part I
Too be honest Alpha, it's kinda bland and boring. It's just a base with bricks on it...
I really like the droid though, has a good shape! I think that the polluted river could use some other color in it, looks like ink.
And I know how you feel about GIMP, it's very time consuming and you feel like you need a rest from it now and then.
I really like the droid though, has a good shape! I think that the polluted river could use some other color in it, looks like ink.
And I know how you feel about GIMP, it's very time consuming and you feel like you need a rest from it now and then.
Re: The Battle of Arnathas Part I
I know, it could have been greebled more, I should have taken apart the WHOLE dragon instead of the the legs. And it's supposed to look like ink, pitch blank, as Substance 46 corrupts everything, and literally can destroy anything, so debris, oil, and various other wastes fall in there.
Although I could have gave it some texture... hmm...
Although I could have gave it some texture... hmm...
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 29
Re: The Battle of Arnathas Part I
Nice! I am requesting permission to do a wastleland planet.
-Aki-- Non-Guild Member
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Re: The Battle of Arnathas Part I
Thats so cool and I like the planet. I still go with that. I mean its great, I love the lake.
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thunder-clone- Non-Guild Member
- Location : kalee
Re: The Battle of Arnathas Part I
Thunder-blade wrote:Too be honest Alpha, it's kinda bland and boring. It's just a base with bricks on it...
That's my opinion as well...
DarthPineapple- VIP Former Staff
- Age : 30
Location : The Netherlands
Re: The Battle of Arnathas Part I
Aki-kundu wrote:Nice! I am requesting permission to do a wastleland planet.
I don't think you need to, he doesn't own them all of anything.
As usual, I liked it but I don't think that it's one of your best.
Re: The Battle of Arnathas Part I
I always like your comics .
But you can do without the title page (maybe a simple banner), and I'd prefer if you're dealing with a cannonical enviorment or bio-agent (try making your posion a offshoot of something in-universe, like Trihexalon, or Trihexalophine).
But you can do without the title page (maybe a simple banner), and I'd prefer if you're dealing with a cannonical enviorment or bio-agent (try making your posion a offshoot of something in-universe, like Trihexalon, or Trihexalophine).
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