Post apoc soldier (With short poem)
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Post apoc soldier (With short poem)
He sprinted fast, across the blood red soil,
Which once was the ground for a world of toil
Thanks to his training, he didn't run out of breath,
In his past, he had only known death.
Seeing his family killed turned him mad,
As he witness the killer behead his lad.
Still now, he continued to feel pain,
But now to him, life is just a game.
As the crimson sun set over the hills,
He started to think about todays kills.
"Still, there will be more to kill tommorow"
He is the wanderer, the bringer of sorrow.
I know that was crap, but here is the pic.
Sorry for the lack of pics, I will take some more soon.
Which once was the ground for a world of toil
Thanks to his training, he didn't run out of breath,
In his past, he had only known death.
Seeing his family killed turned him mad,
As he witness the killer behead his lad.
Still now, he continued to feel pain,
But now to him, life is just a game.
As the crimson sun set over the hills,
He started to think about todays kills.
"Still, there will be more to kill tommorow"
He is the wanderer, the bringer of sorrow.
I know that was crap, but here is the pic.
Sorry for the lack of pics, I will take some more soon.
-Aki-- Non-Guild Member
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Re: Post apoc soldier (With short poem)
I like the gun but the body and legs are ugly. Ah well it's sharpie. That explains it.
DarthPineapple- VIP Former Staff
- Age : 30
Location : The Netherlands
Re: Post apoc soldier (With short poem)
The poem was great, and I liked the way you made him looked "scuffed up" Nice work!
Last edited by astoriabluelegos on Fri Nov 21, 2008 9:20 pm; edited 1 time in total
astoriabluelegos- VIP Former Staff
- Age : 35
Location : Oregon
Re: Post apoc soldier (With short poem)
DarthPineapple wrote:I like the gun but the body and legs are ugly. Ah well it's sharpie. That explains it.
That's where you're wrong DP! Sharpie doesn't always look bad!
ABL wrote:The poem was great, and I lied the way you made him looked "scuffed up" Nice work! Smile Blue Arc
Lied?
Nice work Aki! It looks pretty good!
Re: Post apoc soldier (With short poem)
Legs are a bit off, but the torso looks very nice. Head would've worked fine without adding Sharpie marks to it.
Axel- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 29
Location : Australia
Re: Post apoc soldier (With short poem)
I agree with Axel regarding the head; the blood is a little too bright. Dark red anyone?
And the legs are a little blubby.
And the legs are a little blubby.
80-0- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 30
Location : New York, New YORK!
Re: Post apoc soldier (With short poem)
Thunder-blade wrote:That's where you're wrong DP! Sharpie doesn't always look bad!
No, 1 out of 50 figs is good... and this one isn't that one.
DarthPineapple- VIP Former Staff
- Age : 30
Location : The Netherlands
Re: Post apoc soldier (With short poem)
And where did you come out with that statistic?
Just messing with ya... I do actually think that most Sharpie jobs don't end up great... that's why mine are so special!
Just messing with ya... I do actually think that most Sharpie jobs don't end up great... that's why mine are so special!
Re: Post apoc soldier (With short poem)
Thunder-blade wrote:And where did you come out with that statistic?
Just messing with ya... I do actually think that most Sharpie jobs don't end up great... that's why mine are so special!
I think using sharpie on a Lego fig is cheap and ugly. (no offense)
DarthPineapple- VIP Former Staff
- Age : 30
Location : The Netherlands
Re: Post apoc soldier (With short poem)
Well it's cheap... I'll give you that... but it's not always ugly...
Re: Post apoc soldier (With short poem)
Thunder-blade wrote:Well it's cheap... I'll give you that... but it's not always ugly...
As I said, it's most of the time, but not always.
DarthPineapple- VIP Former Staff
- Age : 30
Location : The Netherlands
Re: Post apoc soldier (With short poem)
Yeah I know...
ANYWAYS... let's get back on topic before a Mod sees us!
ANYWAYS... let's get back on topic before a Mod sees us!
Re: Post apoc soldier (With short poem)
Thunder-blade wrote:Yeah I know...
ANYWAYS... let's get back on topic before a Mod sees us!
It's actually on topic because we're discussing an aspect of this Minifig MOC.
DarthPineapple- VIP Former Staff
- Age : 30
Location : The Netherlands
Re: Post apoc soldier (With short poem)
True... but we are more talking about the Sharpies and minifigs...
But if we can talk about it... then argue away!
But if we can talk about it... then argue away!
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