White Lightning WIP

I am working on a starfighter for my sigfig, but in no way am I happy with it. Can you guys point out some flaws and how to solve them?

I like it especially the engines.

Personally, I don't like the front. Give it a smooth feeling, and maybe add some of those 2x6 slants. It's a good start!

You could put this in the Hospital.

I concur.. it isn't really bad.. but it needs work...

It's too blocky and needs some more slopes...

Yeah, it needs some rounded slopes, a lot of em'. Other wise, I think its just the overall design that you are trying that people don't like. I think its pretty good.

The parts you used under the blasters on the side end too abruptly. You could consider slopes for more sleekness. And the colours clash a bit. The old gray tile at the front is sort of strange, and the random black bits are distracting as well.

I too don't like the front all that much, it's just too jagged. And I agree with axel on the guns!

Smooth it out, put a trans disk piece on the engine, and put some trans studs on the blasters.

Thanks! I will try this at the weekend! The problem is that I don't have a lot of rounded slopes. I will have to get creative with this...

@Axel: How can I?

Ah don't mix the bley with brey. Looks like crap unless you're doing stone texture.

I am in the process of solving that problem Rook .

Rook wrote:Ah don't mix the bley with brey. Looks like crap unless you're doing stone texture.

And all of those times when DP said it didn't look good with rocks...

Brey? I assume you mean gray...

I have smoothed the front, sorted the "Wings", and have finished the interior. All in all, it is finished! Can someone please lock this topic?

Can we have a pic? I want to see it!

Unless you're going to make a full topic for it...

Just wait. It should be up tomorrow!

Ok cool!

Can't wait to see the improved version!