Entry for OH NO! Contest - Far Trooper Deployment

Here is my one entry picture to the OH NO! Contest:

With scouting out a large island on a CIS controlled planet as their objective, two 222nd Legion FAR troopers jump out of a Larty from 50 Thousand Feet with Extended Flight Packs...or without...

This is my first experiment with perspective...the micro island is supposed to seem like it is thousands of feet below the gunship. How do you think I fared with that? This thread is being made so I can get replies about my experiment with perspective...how can I improve, what should be done, etc.

Sorry, no gallery link. Only other pictures taken were from different angles.

You should probably put the gunship more close to the island...

pdragon27 wrote:You should probably put the gunship more close to the island...

Oppisite. Make it farther away.

It looks good, the only problem for me is the the white paper in the background, I think it'll look better with blue paper.

Gah that's what my dad said Jens! Yea I just wanted to blind out the backround, so I used the normal white.

Zepher wrote:

pdragon27 wrote:You should probably put the gunship more close to the island...

Oppisite. Make it farther away.

Yes, what I said, and raise up the clouds so they're closer to the gunship to show almost 3D perspective.

And that other thing I said in that other topic.

No you took my idea!!! I built mine yesterday and did not have time to post it!! I swear I had this same idea, the forgoten jetpack thing!!!

I hope that you know I am still going to post mine. I swear I did not copy yours.

Clonecommando007 wrote:Gah that's what my dad said Jens! Yea I just wanted to blind out the backround, so I used the normal white.

Haha, great minds think alike.....

NICE! I love the use of forced perspective, and the "red Light" in the Gunship is a great touch, FANTASTIC WORK CC!!!

Ha ha ha ha, very nice.

astoriabluelegos wrote:NICE! I love the use of forced perspective, and the "red Light" in the Gunship is a great touch, FANTASTIC WORK CC!!!

I think that is just light going through the white pieces...

That looks pretty good. But the forgotten extended flight pack...priceless!

its very coool

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The backround is grey and the sky isn`t so I thick you should take another picture but with blue backround so it looks more realistick.

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Heh, I can imagine him going splat. If you were to do this for a comic I'd just edit the background, I can show you how maybe if you want.

Very cool!

This is a great technique!!

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Clonecommando007 wrote:Gah that's what my dad said Jens! Yea I just wanted to blind out the backround, so I used the normal white.

Haha, great minds think alike.....

I love him >>>

pdragon27 wrote:

astoriabluelegos wrote:NICE! I love the use of forced perspective, and the "red Light" in the Gunship is a great touch, FANTASTIC WORK CC!!!

I think that is just light going through the white pieces...

Actually the red light is intended...I used a special LED...I had to recruit someone to hold it from the other side of the blind...I wouldn't let something that cool go undone by me...thank you very much.

astoriabluelegos wrote:NICE! I love the use of forced perspective, and the "red Light" in the Gunship is a great touch, FANTASTIC WORK CC!!!

Actually, I was testing with stuff like that only a few days ago! For Christmas, I got a pen with a detachable LED light that had two modes - white and red. I stuck it in my newly built gunship, and thought about using that same light in the gunship for a comic.

I love it. It's perfect the way it is.

I like it. It's funny!

I say the perspective was okay, but move the gunship up a bit further.

I think the red florecent light is genious i love awsome work!! 5 star rating

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You never fail to impress me CC! You can pull off the same effects of a GIMPer's flawlessly! My only complaints are the facts that, as some have said before, it doesn't look as though he's jumping from many miles up, and the MOC itself is very unsubstantial. It's a gunship (again, with wicked cool lighting), and a miniature-scale island .

boost wrote:I think the red florescent light is genius. I love awesome work!! 5 star rating

Learn to spell, improve your bloody sentence structure, or get out . To quote Mr. Jackson... "I'm tired of these motherf*cking [noobs in] this motherf*cking [forum]."

Do you mind if I do something like this in a comic?

Looks really cool ,but the ship looks like it's about to crash in a white wall ..... still I loved it.