134st Support Legion. 1. The trap

After a heavy battle General Kasajsi returns at base.
Reports are comming in that droids have set up a trap on Tatoonie.
General Kasajsi sends Clones to investigate.



Back at the base











Im new in this thing so im not know how to use Speciel effects if you have a program i can use please tell me.
And please comment on what i could do better

Okay, first, work on the spelling in the comic.

Second, use text bubbles. Don't just put a bubble near someone's head, put a triangle somewhere there.

Third, you need greebles. It's just a bunch of bricks on a plate.

Fourth, well...

Hmm kind of a vague story and the MOC isn't that good as well...

Can someone tell me what was going on here?

So first, it goes from a battle, to the ship? How did it happen? Did they use a teleporter and MAGICALLY GET BACK ON THE VENATOR?

Cool it guys. It may not be the best, but I liked it. The clones you used are really cool. Nice work .

Yes, I must admit, those Clones are nice! If you need help with SFX, go to the GIMP tutorials. I'm sure T-b, Sial, Joe, or I can help you.

It's actually not too bad for a first try!

Just work on what you want to happen, it is kinda jumpy.

I really like the first scene though! And the minifigs you use are very nice!

Dialogue and story is what you need to work on now, the set (background) is ok!

Thanks for the many comments, I will try to be bether next time a make this again.