704th Tactical Strike - #1 - 'Night Ops'

Oh, wait. Its Supernova. I use that for explosions sometimes...

Oh yeah...

Yeah, Supernova it, then extend and mess around with the options.

I'm going to have to get off my behind and start turning out some more comics, 'cause I've got the competition .

Nice effects, as always (seems meh fire/sparks is all over the place now ), however, I have to say, wouldn't 'ya think that the Ebon Hawk would be impounded after 6,000 years ?

I'm rather glad that the new subject matter are cities and those finishing off their stolen snow to go to cities...

Don't worry Sial! I still have to finish up on Ando Prime, then I go to Raxus II. Another Ice world!

Very nice MOC. Can't wait for more.

The jet trooper is by far one of my favourite figures out of it, I love how you made the jetpack out of binoculars.

Awesome comic! Did you make the backdrop for the first picture or is it from something else?

great comic, very exciting. The first panel is amazing. However, if I may make a request, I'd try to cut down on the language. It's not a big issue, but it's unnecessary. Good job though, I'm off to read the others!

Language? I count "Hurry the hell up," and "Where the bloody hell is Anna?" - minor 'swears', at most. If that offends you, I wouldn't go near Sial's 541^st Chronicles. Unless you just meant the word count, in which case... I still wouldn't go near 541^st Chronicles.

The Jinja Ninja wrote:Language? I count "Hurry the hell up," and "Where the bloody hell is Anna?" - minor 'swears', at most. If that offends you, I wouldn't go near Sial's 541^st Chronicles. Unless you just meant the word count, in which case... I still wouldn't go near 541^st Chronicles.

Sorry, I wasn't trying to be critical. I'm not naive, I know clones use language, but I think it was unnecessary. You used it at times when it seemed like you couldn't find another adjective. Using language to embellish is useless, but when it is used to show extreme emotion, it's nice. Just a tip, not a criticism.

The animated graphics on this are great. Good job putting the whole thing together!

I thought that it needed something that needed to sharpen it up a bit so I tought it nneded to be longer and more action.