92nd Legion Datafile 4 -LANDING-

Nice. I like your clones alot. And the black and white gunship is cool.
Any spoilers as to what will happen in the next comic?

Eh, stop making short ones and combine them to make long ones!

It's not bad, nothing really happens though, nice gunship though!

WIN.

And knowing Uber, it's just gonna be 'KILLDROIDNEXTDROID'.

Welp, just uploaded 10 more pictures so I'll merge these 2 probably.

This is a bit short, make some larger ones in the future. Also, what about text bubbles instead?

EDIT: After you've edited it is longer but still a bit too short.

Re-check, I just added 10 more slides.

And I edited it.

14 slides conveying a plot well is short?
Whats your definition of a long comic?

Well let me say it in another way: The things that happen in it are very short. They only land and then search a base, and a trooper gets something odd. In real probably like 2-3 minutes, which isn't really a story.

Pretty nice!

Though the story could be a TAD bit longer.

The scenery was pure awesome!

The greebles and fallen stuff made me believe it was an attacked base! Good work!

The base part was quick, but the time between scouting and entering the base was alot longer, maybe a few days.

Yeah, but the base was really cool.

As in all the fallen objects, though it'd be cool if part of the roof caved in.

Oh yeah, that one trooper shot himself, if you guys were wondering.

That was pretty cool! I like their gunship.

Holy, Aki, what are you doing up that late?

I really like the comic, and your troops look good!

cc-117 wrote:Holy, Aki, what are you doing up that late?

He lives in Europe... not in the US.

Was that trooper on drugs, why was he acting so strange?

I have to say, that was fairly cool. The whole ghost thing was intense, if you use that, this could get very cool very fast.

great job uber! I love the gunship!

Cool idea with the crazy trooper! It was a good comic as well! I'm jealous of your gunship. Can't wait to see #5!

Zepher wrote:I have to say, that was fairly cool. The whole ghost thing was intense, if you use that, this could get very cool very fast.

Theres no real 'ghosts' the trooper went insane with the murder of all his brothers, so he thinks that Angar and his troops are ghosts.

Thats creepy! More to come?