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Post by Jedi Joe Sat Feb 21, 2009 10:46 pm

Good story, Ube. I like how the troop went paranoid! Razz
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Post by Zepher Sat Feb 21, 2009 10:50 pm

Uberlag wrote:
Zepher wrote:I have to say, that was fairly cool. The whole ghost thing was intense, if you use that, this could get very cool very fast.

Theres no real 'ghosts' the trooper went insane with the murder of all his brothers, so he thinks that Angar and his troops are ghosts.

I know there are no real ghosts, but the idea of insane troopers from stress is cool. Trap them in a room some time in your story and you will be a winner.
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Post by Bizzle Sat Feb 21, 2009 10:51 pm

Zepher wrote:
Uberlag wrote:
Zepher wrote:I have to say, that was fairly cool. The whole ghost thing was intense, if you use that, this could get very cool very fast.

Theres no real 'ghosts' the trooper went insane with the murder of all his brothers, so he thinks that Angar and his troops are ghosts.

I know there are no real ghosts, but the idea of insane troopers from stress is cool. Trap them in a room some time in your story and you will be a winner.

Oh I like the insane trooper too. And like Zeph said lock them all in a room and that will make it better.
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Post by Uberlag Sat Feb 21, 2009 10:54 pm

Yeah, theres more than one trooper left in this base, so eventually one will be interrogated, because he knows something the cameras can't see.
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Post by flare Sat Feb 21, 2009 11:03 pm

Uberlag wrote:
Zepher wrote:I have to say, that was fairly cool. The whole ghost thing was intense, if you use that, this could get very cool very fast.

Theres no real 'ghosts' the trooper went insane with the murder of all his brothers, so he thinks that Angar and his troops are ghosts.

he was probably seeing thing that weren't there. ITs not the same thing as in your in the desert and you haven't had water. Things start to pop out.

It was a very good comic Uber!
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Post by Uberlag Sat Feb 21, 2009 11:06 pm

If all your friends and family died and you were confined to a small area, and their corpses and blood were everywhere you would probably suffer from some mental problems.
The point is, he was clinically insane and hallucinated ghosts.
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Post by Zepher Sat Feb 21, 2009 11:08 pm

No one is disputing that Uber! We're just saying some cool ideas. Wink

I think that we comic makers should set up our own little mini guild Razz
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Post by flare Sat Feb 21, 2009 11:13 pm

Uberlag wrote:If all your friends and family died and you were confined to a small area, and their corpses and blood were everywhere you would probably suffer from some mental problems.
The point is, he was clinically insane and hallucinated ghosts.
That was the word I couldn't spell it.
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Post by MuffinHobo Sun Feb 22, 2009 2:46 am

Oh so they are not actually ghost? He is like so sad that his gone crazy... Okay I get it now! Smile
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Post by Gerrard Sun Feb 22, 2009 3:44 am

It's hard to get the meaning but otherwise its pretty cool
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Post by Thunder-blade Sun Feb 22, 2009 4:17 am

So he thinks that they are ghosts? Hmm, that's not the conclusion I reached! Laughing

I thought he was in shock from all that war and was thinking he went crazy...
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Post by Uberlag Sun Feb 22, 2009 4:23 am

He went crazy, thinks these troopers coming in are ghosts, shoots himself.
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Post by MuffinHobo Sun Feb 22, 2009 7:43 am

Well this was wack... can't wait for the next one! Smile
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Post by Gerrard Sun Feb 22, 2009 2:38 pm

I never would have thought of my clone trooper seeing a ghost! Razz
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Post by Jedi Joe Sun Feb 22, 2009 2:51 pm

Gerrard wrote:I never would have thought of my clone trooper seeing a ghost! Razz

Have you ever thought of your clone trooper being a human being?
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Post by Gerrard Sun Feb 22, 2009 5:03 pm

Jedi Joe wrote:
Gerrard wrote:I never would have thought of my clone trooper seeing a ghost! Razz

Have you ever thought of your clone trooper being a human being?

Well maybe I have, maybe I haven't?
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Post by LegoBoyRobert Sun Feb 22, 2009 5:13 pm

I really like this one, Uber. I love your gunship. And I envy how many troops you have.

But, to make it more obvious the clone is shooting himself, use an old skeleton arm, not a normal arm. then when the skeleton arm is on, take the gun and have it point the trooper's head.
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Post by Gerrard Sun Feb 22, 2009 6:06 pm

LegoBoyRobert wrote:I really like this one, Uber. I love your gunship. And I envy how many troops you have.

But, to make it more obvious the clone is shooting himself, use an old skeleton arm, not a normal arm. then when the skeleton arm is on, take the gun and have it point the trooper's head.

That is a good point. Would make it look more real.
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Post by Uberlag Sun Feb 22, 2009 6:24 pm

Skeleton Arm=Real?
And how would I go about attaching it Roll Eyes .
And you can pretty clearly see gun pointing to head.
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Post by Zepher Sun Feb 22, 2009 7:00 pm

I got it Uber, if it's any help, though it looks like he never shot himself, just that he was going to. Blood would have been nice.

(5th comment on your comic? You still have zero on mine Razz)
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Post by Gerrard Sun Feb 22, 2009 8:07 pm

I do think though that the word bubble were well placed.
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Post by Uberlag Sun Feb 22, 2009 8:18 pm

Gerrard wrote:I do think though that the word bubble were well placed.

....?
You've been doing a lot of this, just throwing in random stuff that has nothing to do with the conversation..
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Post by Thunder-blade Sun Feb 22, 2009 9:19 pm

Yeah, also, you could add it all in one post instead of throwing it all around to increase your post count.

(notice who's saying this! Laughing)
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Post by Alpha Sun Feb 22, 2009 9:26 pm

*COUGHCOUGHAHEMSPAMMERAHEMCOUGHCOUGHCOUGH*

But of course, I'm not the one to talk. Talk about spamming. (;

Anyhow, I liked the trooper's suicide from the horrors.

You'd think this'd happen more often.
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Post by marshak Thu Mar 19, 2009 8:18 pm

man i love your clones! the black paint job rules!
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