92nd Legion Datafile 4 -LANDING-
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Gerrard
Muskey15
MuffinHobo
Zepher
[Jay]
Valkire
cc-117
-Aki-
DarthPineapple
Alpha
Thunder-blade
Bizzle
Uberlag
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Good story, Ube. I like how the troop went paranoid!
Jedi Joe- Guild Member
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Uberlag wrote:Zepher wrote:I have to say, that was fairly cool. The whole ghost thing was intense, if you use that, this could get very cool very fast.
Theres no real 'ghosts' the trooper went insane with the murder of all his brothers, so he thinks that Angar and his troops are ghosts.
I know there are no real ghosts, but the idea of insane troopers from stress is cool. Trap them in a room some time in your story and you will be a winner.
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Zepher wrote:Uberlag wrote:Zepher wrote:I have to say, that was fairly cool. The whole ghost thing was intense, if you use that, this could get very cool very fast.
Theres no real 'ghosts' the trooper went insane with the murder of all his brothers, so he thinks that Angar and his troops are ghosts.
I know there are no real ghosts, but the idea of insane troopers from stress is cool. Trap them in a room some time in your story and you will be a winner.
Oh I like the insane trooper too. And like Zeph said lock them all in a room and that will make it better.
Bizzle- Guild Member
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Location : here..I think...
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Yeah, theres more than one trooper left in this base, so eventually one will be interrogated, because he knows something the cameras can't see.
Uberlag- Non-Guild Member
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Location : Arizona
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Uberlag wrote:Zepher wrote:I have to say, that was fairly cool. The whole ghost thing was intense, if you use that, this could get very cool very fast.
Theres no real 'ghosts' the trooper went insane with the murder of all his brothers, so he thinks that Angar and his troops are ghosts.
he was probably seeing thing that weren't there. ITs not the same thing as in your in the desert and you haven't had water. Things start to pop out.
It was a very good comic Uber!
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If all your friends and family died and you were confined to a small area, and their corpses and blood were everywhere you would probably suffer from some mental problems.
The point is, he was clinically insane and hallucinated ghosts.
The point is, he was clinically insane and hallucinated ghosts.
Uberlag- Non-Guild Member
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Location : Arizona
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No one is disputing that Uber! We're just saying some cool ideas.
I think that we comic makers should set up our own little mini guild
I think that we comic makers should set up our own little mini guild
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That was the word I couldn't spell it.Uberlag wrote:If all your friends and family died and you were confined to a small area, and their corpses and blood were everywhere you would probably suffer from some mental problems.
The point is, he was clinically insane and hallucinated ghosts.
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Oh so they are not actually ghost? He is like so sad that his gone crazy... Okay I get it now!
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So he thinks that they are ghosts? Hmm, that's not the conclusion I reached!
I thought he was in shock from all that war and was thinking he went crazy...
I thought he was in shock from all that war and was thinking he went crazy...
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He went crazy, thinks these troopers coming in are ghosts, shoots himself.
Uberlag- Non-Guild Member
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Location : Arizona
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Gerrard wrote:I never would have thought of my clone trooper seeing a ghost!
Have you ever thought of your clone trooper being a human being?
Jedi Joe- Guild Member
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Jedi Joe wrote:Gerrard wrote:I never would have thought of my clone trooper seeing a ghost!
Have you ever thought of your clone trooper being a human being?
Well maybe I have, maybe I haven't?
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I really like this one, Uber. I love your gunship. And I envy how many troops you have.
But, to make it more obvious the clone is shooting himself, use an old skeleton arm, not a normal arm. then when the skeleton arm is on, take the gun and have it point the trooper's head.
But, to make it more obvious the clone is shooting himself, use an old skeleton arm, not a normal arm. then when the skeleton arm is on, take the gun and have it point the trooper's head.
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LegoBoyRobert wrote:I really like this one, Uber. I love your gunship. And I envy how many troops you have.
But, to make it more obvious the clone is shooting himself, use an old skeleton arm, not a normal arm. then when the skeleton arm is on, take the gun and have it point the trooper's head.
That is a good point. Would make it look more real.
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Skeleton Arm=Real?
And how would I go about attaching it .
And you can pretty clearly see gun pointing to head.
And how would I go about attaching it .
And you can pretty clearly see gun pointing to head.
Uberlag- Non-Guild Member
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Location : Arizona
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I got it Uber, if it's any help, though it looks like he never shot himself, just that he was going to. Blood would have been nice.
(5th comment on your comic? You still have zero on mine )
(5th comment on your comic? You still have zero on mine )
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Gerrard wrote:I do think though that the word bubble were well placed.
....?
You've been doing a lot of this, just throwing in random stuff that has nothing to do with the conversation..
Uberlag- Non-Guild Member
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Yeah, also, you could add it all in one post instead of throwing it all around to increase your post count.
(notice who's saying this! )
(notice who's saying this! )
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*COUGHCOUGHAHEMSPAMMERAHEMCOUGHCOUGHCOUGH*
But of course, I'm not the one to talk. Talk about spamming. (;
Anyhow, I liked the trooper's suicide from the horrors.
You'd think this'd happen more often.
But of course, I'm not the one to talk. Talk about spamming. (;
Anyhow, I liked the trooper's suicide from the horrors.
You'd think this'd happen more often.
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
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man i love your clones! the black paint job rules!
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