Droid production Facility(Amocican Idol entry) *Pic heavy!*

Sialboats wrote:
Then make it so it looks like it has a roof, but is cut away .

And I'm not too sure who the hell you think you are to cast judgement on my statements...

Im sorry, Sialbboats I don't know if you meant that as a joke (I seem to have innsulted a lot of people today !).
Your ideas were better than mine, so who am I to talk...

I barfed when I saw this. Like everyone else said, Gray baseplates? Un-holed walls? I can't even remember all I hated about this.

It's a nice idea, but falls short due to
-The green baseplate; at least put some tiles in there so it doesn't look as plain
-the walls; I'd fill in the gaps with black bricks, to kind of give it a pattern
-the doorway; it needs a door and maybe a keypad or something
-The conveyor belt; It's a great design, but I think it needs some completed droids, not just little pieces.
All in all, I'd say it's sub-par, would be better if this were a WIP, IMHO.

I'm gonna agree with what most others are saying. The walls have holes in them, the entrance is tacky, and the floor is green. At least tile the floors with gray plates or something... Another room wouldn't hurt either. Like a control or conference room.

The suggestion to put solme completed droids is also good. Perhaps you could put markers on the floor to show where the droids are going when they're finished.

And, of course, greebles.

EDIT: heh, Phazonix pretty much said what I said.

Yea, a second floor control room overlook would definantly be cool.

Get a sponsor from Lego and you could make floor after floor, like the picture!

Ham701 wrote:I barfed when I saw this. Like everyone else said, Gray baseplates? Un-holed walls? I can't even remember all I hated about this.

Seriously, GTFO. We don't need Non-guild member noobs like you running around and spamming.

@Everybody else: Thank you for finnaly posting some constructive stuff!

CT44 wrote:

Ham701 wrote:I barfed when I saw this. Like everyone else said, Gray baseplates? Un-holed walls? I can't even remember all I hated about this.

Seriously, GTFO. We don't need Non-guild member noobs like you running around and spamming.

@Everybody else: Thank you for finnaly posting some constructive stuff!

He's right. I would have said the same. I suggest that you rebuild it. Start over maybe?

Just because I've got an opinion of what I felt like makes me a noob?

But it's just worthless spam...There is nothing constructive about that...

Enough of this gay fight and on to what you need to do:
1.Make the floor gray
2.Patch the holes in the wall
3. 2 Magnaguards can't guard the whole thing
4. Connect the arch with the wall

Looks pretty good but the walls need to be connected and also, where do the parts come from? By that I mean where do the droids parts come from in the factory.

Through the front gate? I don't know where else they would come through? Or maybe there is another room that isn't shown.

Yes but, shouldn't a droid factory make droid parts? Maybe add a mold (Big brick) to look like a mold and studs are followed behind the "Mold".

1. Put in more plants.
2. Even the plants out.
3. take out the holes in the walls.
4. take out that rock inside the building.
5. Put more tools for making droids along the assembly line.
6. Make a different assembly line that molds the droid parts or something of that sort.
7. Make the floor inside a grey color.
8. Make the floor outside different levels/hights.
9. Make the ground outside different colors of green and brown.
10. Make that arch look like it actually does something.
11. Add some flippin detail.



I think that's why so many people just say what's wrong. It looks so effortless that they think there's no point in making an effort to comment well on someones creation that looks like they made it with their eyes closed...

Anyways, It's a great idea. You just need to add a lot of detail.

Thank you DY! You are the first person who has actually helped me and been calm about it.

I think I have a idea for the arch to make it do some thing maybe there could be a force field under by putting a see through plate (Preferable red) under it. That would look very good.

This turned out great. The conveyor belt looks good.

Hmm. Here is what I think you should do:

1. Put grey base plates for the inside and the green on the outside.
2. Make the plants grow in piles with a couple stray.
3. Greebles.
4. More droid making things.
Also , guys, whats wrong with the walls? Pizzamovies does it all the time and you don't say anything!

why wrote:Also , guys, whats wrong with the walls? Pizzamovies does it all the time and you don't say anything!

I have noticed people don't say anything to him; and I would given the opportunity. But it's 'cause he's a big YouTube guy and is really popular. People don't like disagreeing with the cool kid at school.

I know...That really bugs me. On his Cato Nemodia MOC, nobody said one word about the walls. Or to Gareth in his films.

CT44 wrote:I know...That really bugs me. On his Cato Nemodia MOC, nobody said one word about the walls. Or to Gareth in his films.

Well, I thought his Moc sucked... Does that make you feel any better?

Nope...It just bugs me how much bias there is on this sight...

Well CT, I think that you did it better than PizzaMovies. I think that he should have used grey bricks for that and it just looked weird on there with bright red bricks. I think that the grey you used here was better.

Thank you! I mean, PM used red bricks and nobody would dare say anything against it...