Droid production Facility(Amocican Idol entry) *Pic heavy!*

I don't think that many people payed attention to the details. It was so big with a lot of minifigures and walkers and such, that it wasn't eally noticed. (Or it was and they just didn't say anything.

Ok back on topci, are you allowed to redo your entry - or is it too late?

Well, I don't have anymore time and the entrys are do at Midnight...Plus I already submitted it to Dalg...

Oh ok, well maybe you can do it another time but as an other creation thing. Then when you update, you can post it there.

Can't wait to see the thing n better format once the contest is done.
My 100th post!

Ok so what happened dude? For a while you were making hella good MOCs then you revert to making hella crapy MOCs. This isn't good dude. If this continues I think the council can kick you out of the guild...atleast that is what it seems like form what I have read.

That's way different.

PM utilizes that technique for a base/fort. You're using it as a Droid Factory.

Alpha wrote:That's way different.

PM utilizes that technique for a base/fort. You're using it as a Droid Factory.

That's right, you don't get open air factories with green floors and gaping holes in the walls.

Two frikking magnaguards?!

ONE Jedi could pwn this place so hard!

Make both a chute and worker droids as a source from which the droid parts come. The construction of the belt and the 'arms' is about the best part of the MOC. You'll want a large grey baseplate before you move on with construction, of course. As for the walls, if you want to keep them with that build, use some side mounted foliage. I see you have the Jungle Cutter; use the rest of the tree-tops with side-mounters and cover up the holes with the foliage. I see you did it in but one place, but that's lame coverage. If you have any other foliage pieces in regular green, by all means mount them. As for the gate, use some blue lightsaber blades and blue cones/mini-pillars and make a laser gate, if not an actual gate, and extend it from the left to the right of the emplacement.

Someone mentioned a lofted control center: I would agree, but add that you should surround it with even more so foliage, and add a roof to the facility shielded by additional foliage. So get lots and lots and LOTS of foliage for this reproduction.

Now I just thought of something else: When making the control center, make a door into which a droid can carry a pile of droid parts and dump it down a chute which has a hatch which he opens *inside* the command center but is connected to the belt. Also add some side-guards to the belt so the parts don't fall off to the side, and if so make a wheel to turn the belt with ease.

Gerrard wrote:I don't think that many people payed attention to the details. It was so big with a lot of minifigures and walkers and such, that it wasn't eally noticed. (Or it was and they just didn't say anything.

Ok back on topci, are you allowed to redo your entry - or is it too late?

Gerrard, Gerrard, Gerrard... *Tisk* Tisk* Okay, what you said was no offense, but completely wrong. Completely! If you don't have details people will notice that and won't be thought of as that great. People do pay attention to details a lot too! But they don't always comment on it. If someone made an Ackbar for example, but put few details on it. It wouldn't look to good, but if they put on all the wrinkles and proper expressions people would praise it for its DETAIL. See my point now?

Kay, I'll try giving this a shot:

1. Add more detail to the production bay, sticking that 1x1 brick on the 2x4 looks just lame.
2. The Gate should have doors, and not just and open doorway. Add more guards too.
3. An above control room would be sweet, like someone suggested.
4. I'm sorry, but the forest theme is lame. Make it on grey basplates, more of a factory
5.Add rooms, and don't just have one production bay in the middle of everything.
6. The wall is one of your smallest problems right now, but change that when you can. (Why don't you check out Legoboy's Wall tutorial . I'm kidding. Don't do that.)
7. The turrent is quite nice, but add some more.
8. There's got to be a place where the parts come from. Do something about that.

Overall, I see this as a bit of a WIP. Give it more detail, I know you can do better.

Bantha, I also put that in my post. I said that people did see it but just didn't comment on it.

That is an awesome droid factory. Its like its on Kashyyk, you know?

MasterBrettKenobi wrote:That is an awesome droid factory. Its like its on Kashyyk, you know?

Why is it on Kashyyyk? He never said that.

Well I just guessed. To me, it looks like its on Kashyyk.

MasterBrettKenobi wrote:Well I just guessed. To me, it looks like its on Kashyyk.

Oh, sorry for pouncing on you like that.

Thats all right. All is forgiven.

You didn't take my idea,did you?

It looks pretty good, but it could use a little bit more work. Maybe a bit more foliage and a tad more detail, such as greebles.

Umm.... CT44, I'll have to agree with everyone else. I think droid facilities are usually underground but wait do I know?

Needs more detail like Alpha said and you need better foilage. The conveyor belt came out good though .

Well sometimes droid facilities can be on the surface (on ground) and sometimes underground. Like one of the episodes, the droid facility was on ground and not underground. Take it from me. I know.

Nice droid factory, but the third picture is kind of blury.

That's a pretty sketchy 'facility'....