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The LAAT Crash (Comic)

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Post by Uberlag Sat Apr 26, 2008 6:06 am

SLIDESHOW (CLICK ME)

Basic storyline:
92nd Legion LAAT that was carrying several troopers to reinforce a base on Tatooine has been shot down by a droid anti-air canon, but as RC 1142 survives the crash many do not. He makes his way to the base that they surprisingly got fairly close to, it has been raided and no signs of life are around, until a Hailfire scout and droid raiding party encounters the lone commando...
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Post by Pandascide Sat Apr 26, 2008 6:10 am

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Post by Uberlag Sat Apr 26, 2008 6:11 am

Its times like these living in the deert is actually good for something, I could do a great Tatooine scene from Episode 4 in my backyard.

"Look sir, Droids!"
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Post by Pandascide Sat Apr 26, 2008 6:16 am

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Post by DarthPineapple Sat Apr 26, 2008 6:41 am

Where is the text?
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Post by astoriabluelegos Sat Apr 26, 2008 7:22 am

WOW that was cool, but I suggest using some kind of "laser" or something *cough*pipe cleaner*cough* to indicate when something/someone is shooting, but other than that, pure AWESOMENESS! I especially like the blown-up and abondoned Turbo Tank, REALLY NICE JOB! Hola Wow! Hola Wow! Blue Arc
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Post by 80-0 Sat Apr 26, 2008 12:23 pm

Yes; in my upcoming TFU vignette I will use trans-red and trans-orange cones to stick on the end of the new blasters to make them appear to be shooting. Wink

Looks cool! Basically I'd echo what ABL said!

And what DP said. Where IS the text? :scratch:
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Post by Bly Sat Apr 26, 2008 12:57 pm

Wow! Shocked

great storyline! I don't really think that it needs text, you can tell what's happening from the pictures.
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Post by 80-0 Sat Apr 26, 2008 1:38 pm

commanderbly42 wrote:Wow! Shocked

great storyline! I don't really think that it needs text, you can tell what's happening from the pictures.

Well, it is a great storyline, but some story boxes would help it a bit.
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Post by Jedi Joe Sat Apr 26, 2008 1:58 pm

Did your legos get all sandy? I hope not, I got my tusken raiders all sandy by playing with them in the sand. But wow, those pics were cool!

This one was disturbing though... Razz
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Post by Uberlag Sat Apr 26, 2008 4:00 pm

Everything got partially sandy, just had to shake it and it was all good.

My adobe photoshop trial ran out, so I cant insert text boxes, which makes me mad.
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Post by Jedi Joe Sat Apr 26, 2008 4:08 pm

Why don't you use MSpaint?
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Post by Uberlag Sat Apr 26, 2008 4:44 pm

Macs don't have MSPaint
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Post by Wuzzupbob Sat Apr 26, 2008 5:02 pm

Jedi Joe wrote:This one was disturbing though... Razz

LOL wow, I completely agree
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Post by Shifto Canucki Sat Apr 26, 2008 5:23 pm

Uberlag wrote:Macs don't have MSPaint

Try Comic Life from plasq. it allows you to lay out actual comic book style panels with speech bubbles etc. It came standard with my wife's iMac but it's only $30 if you need to buy it. They also have a Windows version.

I enjoyed the comic by the way, though I agree it needs some text.

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Post by astoriabluelegos Sat Apr 26, 2008 7:02 pm

I dunno, I think text would kinda distract from the storyline, because you would have to read everything before it moves on, instead of focusing on the scene itself. Wink Blue Arc
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Post by Comrade Faie Sat Apr 26, 2008 8:48 pm

Pretty good... good job of using your surroundings to make a comic! Fordo Yo!
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Post by Zepher Sun Apr 27, 2008 3:35 pm

I'm thikning of starting a somewhat serious comic storyline, somewhat (but not exactly) like Grunts and CC-007's comics combined! I've got to get to work soon!
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Post by Clonecommando007 Mon Apr 28, 2008 1:40 pm

Needs text; in bubbles. OK work though.
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