What Makes the Desert Beautiful

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Editors Note: Sorry for the wait. I'll update the thread tomorrow with the previous issues section. Enjoy being dropped into the middle of nowhere! I liked this issue a lot.

-Zepher

This story has a really good plot, but is it supposed to be "After the Fall"? Because the previous issue was still "Before the Fall" and you didn't say what happened to the main character in that issue.

Zepher is becoming a hollywood writer. I love this story and how you dropped us in the middle of nowhere to eventually tie up both sides together and make us say OOOOHHHHH! I understand now. I love movies like that.

Keep em coming.

eclipsegrafx wrote:I love this story and how you dropped us in the middle of nowhere to eventually tie up both sides together and make us say OOOOHHHHH! I understand now.

Same here! I loved this one and what you're doing.
Damn, I'm still taking guesses at what exactly happened to the world.

This sounds exciting! I can wait to see more from this new series. Post apocalyptic worlds are great for stories. This reminds me of Fallout and The Book of Eli.

So, I'm guessing alien invasion...

I love this Zepher, I always look forward to your amazing comics!

eclipsegrafx wrote:Zepher is becoming a hollywood writer. I love this story and how you dropped us in the middle of nowhere to eventually tie up both sides together and make us say OOOOHHHHH! I understand now. I love movies like that.

Keep em coming.

Exactly. The Fall is the center of the story, but I'm skipping around it. This story is told in majorly not chronological order, but I think it will make sense to everyone. The great thing about planning way ahead is that I don't have to have "Oh S***, will this actually work and piece together" moments, since I have planned out how it will work!

Amazing. I agree with everyone else, it is a great idea to skip from character view to character view. My only complaint is that sometimes in the text it was The Fall, and then the fall.

Have always loved your stories. You need some more pieces, or time, or another builder to create more detailed scenes however. Things I really liked from the comic was the idea that people had built enough to survive. Usually don't hear/see that in apoc stories. I also liked the idea of O.H. Looking forward to more as usual!

Great job on the scenes and storyline, but the jump is a little confusing, but I bet we can all expect what happened will be explained.

legorevolution wrote:Have always loved your stories. You need some more pieces, or time, or another builder to create more detailed scenes however. Things I really liked from the comic was the idea that people had built enough to survive. Usually don't hear/see that in apoc stories. I also liked the idea of O.H. Looking forward to more as usual!

When I'm less pressed for time and featuring scene, I'll build scenes. Since this was mostly a narration comic, scenes take the back seat. When it is an action comic, scenes matter more. It was just snippets of his view here and there, so it was meant to be small scenes. I promise, I have more in store when we get to more interesting places and battles.

'Sides, the desert ain't that interesting anyway.

Sorry for the bump, just needed to announce somewhere that I wasn't dead and that a new episode is on it's way either tonight or tomorrow!

Yay, lookin' forward to it Zeph.