The Butterfly - Guild Challenge

For some reason when I saw this, it reminded me of a butterfly.

I did a few modifications, like making long wings, and smoothing things out. I was running low on tiles and I don't have many light gray tiles, so I had to improvise.

Once again I don't have a camera in my house that can take one good picture of an MOC I make.
This is for the guild build between Lazer and I.

The Night Butterfly



Front:


Cockpit Area:


Wings:


Back:

Um, the picture quality is so bad you can't post it?

No, I posted it, but then I saw how bad the quality was.

Eh, I still don't like the large part in the front.

Troopa Daisy wrote:Eh, I still don't like the large part in the front.

That's what sort of makes it special.

Besides the grey tiles, I like this MOC.

Oh, and that thing up front does make it different; so all the more better. :p

Sorry Gerrard, but I'm not a fan of this one. It has something going, but needs some touching up. First, if you have more light bley bricks, go with SNOT wings, instead of using tiles. It'll look smooth, and there are some good possibilities! Next the cockpit seems very X-wing like, which is fine, but maybe switch it up a bit with some greebles, and more slopes. The nose needs to be a little less blocky, using 1x2 brackets and adding slopes on the side could fix that problem quick. If you can make to those changes, this will be one great MOC!

Not really a night butterfly is it, change the name. A night butterfly would be black or bley.

Knight wrote:Sorry Gerrard, but I'm not a fan of this one. It has something going, but needs some touching up. First, if you have more light bley bricks, go with SNOT wings, instead of using tiles. It'll look smooth, and there are some good possibilities! Next the cockpit seems very X-wing like, which is fine, but maybe switch it up a bit with some greebles, and more slopes. The nose needs to be a little less blocky, using 1x2 brackets and adding slopes on the side could fix that problem quick. If you can make to those changes, this will be one great MOC!

Thanks for the constructive C@C man, I will definitely take these suggestions and update it!

The front looks looks a little bulky, but other than that, looks good.

My friend, it's way too reminiscent (that's how it's spelled, right?) of an X-wing. What I would suggest is that you should switch the cockpit or change the way the wings look.