Legend Of The Fall: Engine Problems

I have not posted a Moc in a while, if you couldn't tell that you probably ought to go Google "Observation Skill Improvement". Anyway I wanted to do something different and perhaps a bit more community oriented for coming back as a builder. So I decided to do a little skit based off Rook's community Moc Legend Of The Fall.



Description: When the engineers said the engine was done about a hour after they went in to install it you couldn't blame us all for being suspicious. Well now those two engineers are dead and the ships completion time is pushed back a couple weeks.

I know this Moc isn't particularly good but I thought it was good enough "comeback" material to post, as always constructive criticism is welcome.

It's not a world class MOC but it's pretty good. I like the detail in the middle.

Heh.

This looks great, Darman. I like the middle greebles and the stuff on the edges is nice.

How about some more action, though?

The area on the left which is flat SNOT could use some more stuff there. Also maybe show the two dead guys?