Did he fall.... again?

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Story:
Some clones just have bad luck.... this one (in the river currently) Has the worst of luck, this is the 3rd time he's fallen in the icy river today! It looks as if the clones will travel as far away from the river as possible from now on....

EDIT Someone please fix the links.... arrgggg I can't...

Done!

Enjoy!

Uh, that is the same MOC you made awhile ago, and nothings happening to anyone....

Wow. Look through the gallery and read my post.

Uh...I guess...
But how is that an OH NO!
He is just in a river...

It's not really an Oh No! If he's fallen three times before... It's more of a "Oh, he fell again..."

Fixed those images for you!

Regardless of the "Oh No" value, this is an incredibly awwesome MOC!

While the "Oh No" value isn't there, the MOC value is through the roof! By god, with that selection of bricks, and your useage of them, you have to be the best landscaper here !

I think the rocks are way to multi-colored, the white and gray don't mix very well...

But the water is cool! And so is the bridge!

Wow, this is utter crap.

How is that an OH NO? He just fell in the freakin' river?

And those rocks are way to jumbled up! Why in the name of Mando'a are there so much white rocks? They need to be in patches.

Why is it studless? Last time I checked, this was Lego, it needs studs?

Why are there teeth in the tree? Did a wampa with rotting gums bite into it?

Epic fail moc with epic fail storyline.

Jedi Joe wrote:Wow, this is utter crap.

How is that an OH NO? He just fell in the freakin' river?

And those rocks are way to jumbled up! Why in the name of Mando'a are there so much white rocks? They need to be in patches.

Why is it studless? Last time I checked, this was Lego, it needs studs?

Why are there teeth in the tree? Did a wampa with rotting gums bite into it?

Epic fail moc with epic fail storyline.

Ouch, that was pretty harsh. The rocks and such definitely could use some work but I think it's still a great moc. Studless is a nice way to go if you can do it right- you should check out a few of my mocs on Flickr. He's still relatively 'new' to the moc'ing game so he's trying out several techniques here in this moc that he still has yet to master. The teeth in the tree are clumps of snow and honestly I thought it was a genius representation. Everyone's entitles to their own opinions however.

Ermm...

Although, like the others said, it isn't really too "Oh No", although it would be if it was a ravine.

The jumbled rocks aren't too swell, but I get the feeling. It looks nice.

legorevolution wrote:Ouch, that was pretty harsh. The rocks and such definitely could use some work but I think it's still a great moc. Studless is a nice way to go if you can do it right- you should check out a few of my mocs on Flickr. He's still relatively 'new' to the moc'ing game so he's trying out several techniques here in this moc that he still has yet to master. The teeth in the tree are clumps of snow and honestly I thought it was a genius representation. Everyone's entitles to their own opinions however.

Well, it isn't nice to tell lies... Is it?

I'm a fan of this - and though I can't really critique it without feeling guilty (I've never done anything similar to this), I must say the rocks are colored bad. The feel and the power is there, but when they're placed like that, it looks too blocky. I would try clumps of snow (white bricks clustered together, not so seperate) and put the dark rocks near the bottom and the bley rocks near the top, like strata lines for the geological form.

Move along... I'm sorry

To have a opinion on something doesn't require you to actually be good at what you're critiquing on.

Back on topic, the only thing I would change is the rocks, but the broken bridge is pretty nice.

darth yoda wrote:<insert fricken awesome pic here>

Go home Jedi joe....

I am at home. How am I at my computer if I'm not at home?

Hello Captain-IM-SO-AWESOME-NO ONE HAS ANYTHING ON ME,
Just because you think your so effin awesome and cool and amazing doesn't make a difference at all, Jedi Joe doesn't like your MOC for obvious reasons, and just because you think your better than all of us doesn't make you awesome.

Go home darth yoda.

Alpha wrote:To have a opinion on something doesn't require you to actually be good at what you're critiquing on.

Back on topic, the only thing I would change is the rocks, but the broken bridge is pretty nice.

Move along... I'm sorry

The reason why the rocks don't look as good as the MOC itself is that it's jumbled up. No, you obviously don't have to make it 1 color, but when I look at a snow covered rock, I don't see a bunch of different colors around it.

Alpha wrote:The reason why the rocks don't look as good as the MOC itself is that it's jumbled up. No, you obviously don't have to make it 1 color, but when I look at a snow covered rock, I don't see a bunch of different colors around it.

I like the look more than any of the other rocks I've done...

And how is this not "Oh no" ?

I love it! It's awesome! Just a small thing drop the "snow" on the rocks it just looks random... but exept for that!

Well DY we both suck because I thought it looks great. I also enjoy building snow scenes. Could it be better, sure, but why? First you don't want to be perfect. Second I might have to rebuild my bignette. Once again I was going for size and no detail. I always seem to lose because I go too big.

Hmm it's great but as already mentioned, all the different colored slopes look very weird.

Not bad, like the river and the bridge The rocks are too busy, the white pieces are too spread out and is a bit hard on the eyes.