Padawan Training *REVISED EDITION*

8x8 vignette:
A disappointed Jedi teacher looks on as Padawan Zori Qayar fails miserably. The training drone has beat him again, flinging his lightsaber into the wall, making an awkward burn.
The Jedi teacher is my sigfig, Yenta Ulos.
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It's great, 'cept it looks a little cramped. Although you can't really fix that on a Vig. Maybe making it a bit taller would help? Anyway, I love the colors. Keep it up!

This looks resonable, but maybe you should add a detail, or something that catches our attention. Like a cool barrel, or blaster effect. Interesting details like that compliment Vignettes, and to me this looks a little bland.

I like the idea of using the plate with technic holes in it to make the lightsaber "fly" into the wall. The overall scene could use some more details though. In addition to the pattern on the walls, maybe controls or dials and maybe a square pattern on the floor instead of just the plain floor.

Thanks for all the great ideas guys! I'll try to incorporate them when I go back over this MOC.

Small bump. Revised it, thanks for the feedback guys!