Retreat from the Swamp on Val'tek

Well, Here's a creation to go along with my SSC sub-faction. I'm not entirely satisfied with it, but it was only a quick build, as I am working on something bigger and better.



Here's the Backstory!
This one only involves Kray and Naben.

:Personal Voice Log: Kray: Discrace. We trudged through that mess of a planet just to find a dead end. The air wasn't very breathable here. And even if it was, the plants produce enough toxin in the air to kill a man in an instant. I had to wear a rebreather helmet. Naben's apperatus worked well enough for him. So there we were. Faced with an entrance with no doors but perhaps a small one. A heat radiated from it's metal plates. The control pantel was nothing but a fried bit of tech, but one button remained. I pressed it, and then the sound of blaster fire filled my ears..

Here's the previous mission.
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Wow! You get better and better each build. I totally love the wall and the way the whole place up there looks. Great job!

Keep on bricking!

I agree with Lazer, you've really hit the mark on this one. I love the back-story, and the build of the MOC is truly a win. Great job!

Thanks guys, It's nice to hear feedback like that.

Wow, this is actually really cool. I don't really know where you could improve it, so I'm impressed.