ERS' Assault-Infected

Story: On the dark planet of Methar, Alpha has created a Nemus Bomb, which has the power to blow up entire planets. Having planted the bomb in his old laboratory, Alpha infected 15 Methar Security Officers with Moriside Diox, and trapped them around the laboratory, defending the bomb. The last of the civillians have fled into Underground Defence Bunkers, but little do they know how powerful and destructive the Nemus is. The ERS has been tasked to disable the bomb, or else Methar's entire population will be wiped out. Will they succeed?


Overview of the team in the laboratory hallway.


Aaron, trying to disable the Electro-Lock on the laboratory's door.


Brov and Jack, defending themselves against a lone "infected one". A dead, leg-less prisoner can be seen.

Definitely a dark part of your story which, for some reason, reminded me of the movie Doom. Anyhow, I want to say it's a nice little scene but somehow, those words don't go there.

Yes, it's either I kill off the ERS when they don't disable it in time and the whole world blows, or they become heroes and a national day is named in honor of them. Hmm... Also notice the buttons on the "infected one's" shirt look like gun wounds. Also (Lol), all my next MOC's will have speechbubbles/ text.

I don;t like the walls, they're open too much.

commanderbly42 wrote:Definitely a dark part of your story which, for some reason, reminded me of the movie Doom. Anyhow, I want to say it's a nice little scene but somehow, those words don't go there.

Yea same here (the doom part)

Certainly brilliant detail and story line but I think you could try a only capture the setting so the feelings you get are enhanced which makes the darkness a little, darker.

Well done:)

DarthPineapple wrote:I don;t like the walls, they're open too much.

That's because I had to find a solution as to how I could leave gaps here and there and yet greeble it, and I based the walls off the Maintenence Tunnel in RC.