The Siege of Helioscant

I am begining work on the ongoing story 'The 222nd Legion Siege of Helioscaunt'.

Let's begin with a breif overview of Helioscaunt:
Helioscaunt is a neutral self supporting planet in the outer rim. Underneath, and deep below the planet's crust are Helio Crystal fields; eliptical shapes where Helio Crystals reside.
Helio Crystals are naturally made minerals that glow very brightly green, and do so because the minerals atoms possess a large amount of energy, thus making them glow. Helioscaunters have dug and drilled thousands of cities and tunnels into the planet, where they can best reach the large Helio Crystal Fields. They excavate the Helio Crystals and then harness their energy in factories to produce all sorts of goods for use and export.
Of course with so many miners and machines excavating so far underneath the crust, they can't all possibly return to the surface every night for bed. So huge caverns were excavated and dug out and underground cities were built. Though most cities get no natural sunlight, they are almost always lit because they are built next to the contantly glowing Helio Crystal Fields. However, the cities are also almost always cloudy, the air is a mix of oxygen, hydrogen, and excess gas used to mine the crystals.
The rock in the planet is mostly white, very odd, and most of the cities build their buildings out of the rock, sometimes the buildings are painted blue, to mark them as commercial buildings.
The deepest and biggest mines are in the Aratone sector of the planet, pictured below. The deepest city is Flat City, where the bottom of the city is flat. Line city is the last city between the known areas and the unknown tunnel. The unknown tunnel is...unknown. Not much is known about it except that it goes towards the planets core. Not many adventurers that venture down the tunnel return, possibly because of the hypothisized great wealth at the end of the tunnel. Theories are that the core of the planet is made up of one giant Helio Crystal Field, and that there is a huge city near the core. Those who do temporarily return tell very few stories...and those rarely make it higher than Line City.
Subterraintropolis is the biggest underground city, the biggest known city on the planet. It is at the bottom of the widest cave/tunnel on the planet. It is at this city where the 222nd invasion is to begin. IG Vault, a recently renamed city, is the supposed CIS stronghold, and the current base of operations for Trimono's Army.
Trimono...A name feared by every trooper in the 222nd Legion. Trimono, or IG-111, is a cyborg Magnaguard created for General Grievous. His Trandoshan Organs and brain, and ruthlessness, were transfered over into a magnaguard like body, similar to the operation of General Grievous himself. IG-111 was given the responsibility of the 111th CIS army, of which the 222nd Leigon rivals.
Aratone Sector Cross section map:


I'm working on the city/story now.

Cant wait !!!

Nice! But you stole my idea for a Trando general !

I think it's well thought out. However, I am all for CANNON, CANNON, CANNON !

Sialboats is your legion's story Cannon?
I know this topic really isn't much without pictures, but I'm still working on them.

I've finished building and photographing my third comic (all done in one day), but I have yet to put the text bubbles into it...Up by mid-week.

Sialboats wrote:I think it's well thought out. However, I am all for CANNON, CANNON, CANNON !

Hey, it's not too far off here, tis is very possible, many plaets in the mid and outer rims were or are mined for different things. I, as the self appointed canon nit-picker of the web; approve your story CC, I like it, and good luck MOCing it!

Sialboats wrote:I think it's well thought out. However, I am all for CANNON, CANNON, CANNON !

Yes, I agree! I love them, especially the ones on capital ships in the CW series! They look so deadly! Cannons ON!

I also appreciate canon work. Maybe you do too?



Sounds good, CC! If you need ideas just ask me; remember, who won the prize(judged by your mom) for best character development story on the CCP? (you probably don't remember, lol, and that's OK )

CommandoEighty-Oh wrote:
Sounds good, CC! If you need ideas just ask me; remember, who won the prize(judged by your mom) for best character development story on the CCP? (you probably don't remember, lol, and that's OK )

Yea I remember that. I don't even know if it ended!

CommandoEighty-Oh wrote:

Sialboats wrote:I think it's well thought out. However, I am all for CANNON, CANNON, CANNON !

Yes, I agree! I love them, especially the ones on capital ships in the CW series! They look so deadly! Cannons ON!

I also appreciate canon work. Maybe you do too?

'

Hahahahaha! That made me laugh, I saw it too, but I was just going to let it go.

Clonecommando007 wrote:

CommandoEighty-Oh wrote:
Sounds good, CC! If you need ideas just ask me; remember, who won the prize(judged by your mom) for best character development story on the CCP? (you probably don't remember, lol, and that's OK )

Yea I remember that. I don't even know if it ended!

Yup, it did! I made up a squad called Trident squad I think and the leader was 80-0(where I got my name from because I just loved the name) and then they all got killed, and then 80-0 was killed by a young Sun Fac, whom Delta later kills.

It did end, and I got 500000 credits or something with which I bought a Juggernaut.

astoriabluelegos wrote:

CommandoEighty-Oh wrote:

Sialboats wrote:I think it's well thought out. However, I am all for CANNON, CANNON, CANNON !

Yes, I agree! I love them, especially the ones on capital ships in the CW series! They look so deadly! Cannons ON!

I also appreciate canon work. Maybe you do too?

'

Hahahahaha! That made me laugh, I saw it too, but I was just going to let it go.

Ahh, canon jokes. Good times...

I won second, and that's when I was new! Anyways, ABL, he's started building, and already published two comics

You? What could YOU have written?



I'll look it up, though.

Zepher wrote:I won second, and that's when I was new! Anyways, ABL, he's started building, and already published two comics

Really??? I've must find and read them!