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The Battle of Arnathas Part I

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The Battle of Arnathas Part I

Post by Alpha on Thu Oct 09, 2008 4:59 am

After CIS Bioweapon Substance 46 was released, a strike team consisting of Arth, Viper, Malos, and Acro was sent to the surface of Arnathas. Upon arrival, they face the horrors of the once beautiful planet...









Overview of the bignette, most of the fauna, Native Species, and life have been corrupted by Substance 46, causing it to turn into dark shades of gray.


A Seperatist A3 MKII Recon Droid, equipped with 2 MPLs (Minimal Pulse Lasers) and 1 G3-A29 Electro-Wave.


Acro, collecting "water" from the polluted lake, which will help 704th BioScience Officers determine the effects of Substance 46.


The polluted lake, with all it's lifeforms dead, or mentally corrupted.

Creator's Note
I had fun making this, this was originally going to be the volcanic planet of Nanos, but I ran out of orange pieces. So then, I decided to make a marshland. There will be a Part II, most likely a Part III, and very unlikely a Part IV. And the guys in the orange suits are Arnathan Guards, who were sent to investigate the lake, but were killed by aggresive and corrupted Nanos Beasts. If you correctly translate the Aurebesh, it'll make sense. Also, I have completely lost intrest in GIMP, as it is time consuming, and it takes up spaces of the MOC. Enjoy!

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Re: The Battle of Arnathas Part I

Post by Thunder-blade on Thu Oct 09, 2008 5:10 am

Too be honest Alpha, it's kinda bland and boring. It's just a base with bricks on it...

I really like the droid though, has a good shape! I think that the polluted river could use some other color in it, looks like ink.

And I know how you feel about GIMP, it's very time consuming and you feel like you need a rest from it now and then.
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Re: The Battle of Arnathas Part I

Post by Alpha on Thu Oct 09, 2008 5:19 am

I know, it could have been greebled more, I should have taken apart the WHOLE dragon instead of the the legs. And it's supposed to look like ink, pitch blank, as Substance 46 corrupts everything, and literally can destroy anything, so debris, oil, and various other wastes fall in there.
Although I could have gave it some texture... hmm...

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Re: The Battle of Arnathas Part I

Post by Darth Yoda on Thu Oct 09, 2008 5:32 am

You lucky dog! Where did you get all of those lime green pieces?? Shocked
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Re: The Battle of Arnathas Part I

Post by -Aki- on Thu Oct 09, 2008 4:36 pm

Nice! I am requesting permission to do a wastleland planet.
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Re: The Battle of Arnathas Part I

Post by thunder-clone on Thu Oct 09, 2008 6:28 pm

Thats so cool and I like the planet. I still go with that. I mean its great, I love the lake.


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Re: The Battle of Arnathas Part I

Post by DarthPineapple on Thu Oct 09, 2008 6:29 pm

Thunder-blade wrote:Too be honest Alpha, it's kinda bland and boring. It's just a base with bricks on it...

That's my opinion as well...
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Re: The Battle of Arnathas Part I

Post by Bly on Thu Oct 09, 2008 9:01 pm

Aki-kundu wrote:Nice! I am requesting permission to do a wastleland planet.

I don't think you need to, he doesn't own them all of anything. Razz

As usual, I liked it but I don't think that it's one of your best.
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Re: The Battle of Arnathas Part I

Post by Sialboats on Thu Oct 09, 2008 10:55 pm

I always like your comics Smile .

But you can do without the title page (maybe a simple banner), and I'd prefer if you're dealing with a cannonical enviorment or bio-agent (try making your posion a offshoot of something in-universe, like Trihexalon, or Trihexalophine).
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