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Post by PizzaMovies Wed Dec 03, 2008 3:41 am

My best film I have made (so far) Tells the story of a Clone Commander during the Clone Wars. So comment on it and tell me what you thing guys and this is also my very first post as a GUILD MEMBER!!! Razz






Also sorry but I don't know how to get a video on the page perhaps someone could help me please. Smile


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Post by Thunder-blade Wed Dec 03, 2008 4:06 am



Fixed for ya!

It wasn't bad... the SFX was kinda crummy but not to shabby (paint I presume?)

The voice acting was alright... a little below average and it was kinda hard to hear what was being said.
The humor didn't seem to fit in this movie...

The animation was great though! Just improve here and there and you are on your way to be a great movie maker!
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Post by vecol05 Wed Dec 03, 2008 4:11 am

I loved it but I couldn't hear the voices well.
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Post by Alpha Wed Dec 03, 2008 4:23 am

Thunder-blade wrote:

Fixed for ya!

It wasn't bad... the SFX was kinda crummy but not to shabby (paint I presume?)

The voice acting was alright... a little below average and it was kinda hard to hear what was being said.
The humor didn't seem to fit in this movie...

The animation was great though! Just improve here and there and you are on your way to be a great movie maker!


Particle Illusion 3.0

Does that really look like paint? Wink Razz Laughing

Anyhow, twas your best our of all of them. The voice could improve a bit, but it's nice.
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Post by Thunder-blade Wed Dec 03, 2008 4:34 am

No... I meant the first SFX work with the lasers...

And I did recognize that explosion as Gareth's work...

DIE JAR JAR!!! Razz
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Post by Alpha Wed Dec 03, 2008 4:36 am

Thunder-blade wrote:No... I meant the first SFX work with the lasers...

And I did recognize that explosion as Gareth's work...

DIE JAR JAR!!! Razz

Yeah, that was his previous movies. He upgraded to PI 3.0 for this one. Wink
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Post by DarthPineapple Wed Dec 03, 2008 7:06 am

The voice are a bid bad, and so is the editing, but still a nice movie.
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Post by Sialboats Wed Dec 03, 2008 10:13 am

While it's more than I could have done, and a lot better than what is up on youtube, I still don't like the particles (as they look far too much like paint) and I still don't like the voices.
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Post by -Aki- Wed Dec 03, 2008 4:09 pm

It is OK. The voice acting is, no offence, horrible. I mean, that commander has got a teenagers voice! And some of the clones had chipmunk voices!

I also noticed a few non-canon parts (Rex being there, the commander saying how good Rex's armour is, even thought he has already worn it in the past, ect)

Plus, you nicked a few of Garet's ideas, and just seems to scream "Ripped of Squad 42!"

Overall: 5/10
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Post by PizzaMovies Wed Dec 03, 2008 4:23 pm

Aki-kundu wrote:It is OK. The voice acting is, no offence, horrible. I mean, that commander has got a teenagers voice! And some of the clones had chipmunk voices!

I also noticed a few non-canon parts (Rex being there, the commander saying how good Rex's armour is, even thought he has already worn it in the past, ect)

Plus, you nicked a few of Garet's ideas, and just seems to scream "Ripped of Squad 42!"

Overall: 5/10

Well I know it isn't the best but what exactly do you think I copied from Squad 42 because I don't really see a thing from it.
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Post by -Aki- Wed Dec 03, 2008 4:32 pm

PizzaMovies wrote:
Aki-kundu wrote:It is OK. The voice acting is, no offence, horrible. I mean, that commander has got a teenagers voice! And some of the clones had chipmunk voices!

I also noticed a few non-canon parts (Rex being there, the commander saying how good Rex's armour is, even thought he has already worn it in the past, ect)

Plus, you nicked a few of Garet's ideas, and just seems to scream "Ripped of Squad 42!"

Overall: 5/10

Well I know it isn't the best but what exactly do you think I copied from Squad 42 because I don't really see a thing from it.

I meant from the earlier films. Should have said Embarassed.
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Post by LegoBoyRobert Wed Dec 03, 2008 5:06 pm

Okay, that is NOT the 501st. Cody is not in it. Star Corps Troops?!?! They are SO not in the 501st legion. And shock troops?!?! Anyways, I like the battle in there.
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Post by Clonecommando007 Wed Dec 03, 2008 8:45 pm

LegoBoyRobert wrote:Okay, that is NOT the 501st. Cody is not in it. Star Corps Troops?!?! They are SO not in the 501st legion. And shock troops?!?! Anyways, I like the battle in there.

Actually, I think the 212th Battalion might be a division in the 501st Legion which might be a division in the 7th Sky Corps...

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Post by LegoBoyRobert Wed Dec 03, 2008 9:04 pm

Clonecommando007 wrote:
LegoBoyRobert wrote:Okay, that is NOT the 501st. Cody is not in it. Star Corps Troops?!?! They are SO not in the 501st legion. And shock troops?!?! Anyways, I like the battle in there.

Actually, I think the 212th Battalion might be a division in the 501st Legion which might be a division in the 7th Sky Corps...
Oh, really? I have got to get some of my facts straight.... Embarassed
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Post by Muskey15 Wed Dec 03, 2008 9:07 pm

great job! The effects are awesome! Marine
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Post by Zepher Wed Dec 03, 2008 9:10 pm

I liked it. Not the best, but far better than the worse. I watched it around when you joined (the site, not a guild). The humor was mis-fit, but other than that it was well done.

Things I really didn't like (take them out and it would be great!)

- Him leaving his troops

- Some of the jokes (the in the heat of the battle jokes were sometimes nice)

- The commander's sassiness for lack of a better word)
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Post by Jeremy012399 Wed Dec 03, 2008 9:22 pm

Good job, I like how you make it sort of a comedy but don't make it stupid funny like when he leaves his troops, I have seen it in all of your movies, just do a little better with that and would be a pretty good lego movie maker (besides Garet6).
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Post by Clonecommando007 Wed Dec 03, 2008 9:31 pm

Remember that you can always make casting calls to members here at the CABG for voices. I'm glad you used my IST tank instructions: http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=297982
I love seeing it in other member's MOC's and videos! I hope you choose to accept my offer and make a video with the instructions. Smile
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Post by LegoBoyRobert Wed Dec 03, 2008 9:41 pm

Clonecommando007 wrote:Remember that you can always make casting calls to members here at the CABG for voices. I'm glad you used my IST tank instructions: http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=297982
I love seeing it in other member's MOC's and videos! I hope you choose to accept my offer and make a video with the instructions. Smile
Oh, CC you don't know the story, on YouTube, PizzaMovies said that's his OWN creation. No credit was given. Surprised
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Post by Clonecommando007 Wed Dec 03, 2008 9:49 pm

LegoBoyRobert wrote:
Clonecommando007 wrote:Remember that you can always make casting calls to members here at the CABG for voices. I'm glad you used my IST tank instructions: http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=297982
I love seeing it in other member's MOC's and videos! I hope you choose to accept my offer and make a video with the instructions. Smile
Oh, CC you don't know the story, on YouTube, PizzaMovies said that's his OWN creation. No credit was given. Surprised

Where? He just changed a few things about it.
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Post by LegoBoyRobert Wed Dec 03, 2008 11:41 pm

Clonecommando007 wrote:
LegoBoyRobert wrote:
Clonecommando007 wrote:Remember that you can always make casting calls to members here at the CABG for voices. I'm glad you used my IST tank instructions: http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=297982
I love seeing it in other member's MOC's and videos! I hope you choose to accept my offer and make a video with the instructions. Smile
Oh, CC you don't know the story, on YouTube, PizzaMovies said that's his OWN creation. No credit was given. Surprised

Where? He just changed a few things about it.
Where? I said on YouTube!
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Post by PizzaMovies Wed Dec 03, 2008 11:42 pm

LegoBoyRobert wrote:
Clonecommando007 wrote:
LegoBoyRobert wrote:Okay, that is NOT the 501st. Cody is not in it. Star Corps Troops?!?! They are SO not in the 501st legion. And shock troops?!?! Anyways, I like the battle in there.

Actually, I think the 212th Battalion might be a division in the 501st Legion which might be a division in the 7th Sky Corps...
Oh, really? I have got to get some of my facts straight.... Embarassed

Yep everything he said was true rather complicated...but true. Just go to "wookiepedia" to see for yourself. Smile
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Post by PizzaMovies Wed Dec 03, 2008 11:45 pm

LegoBoyRobert wrote:
Clonecommando007 wrote:
LegoBoyRobert wrote:
Clonecommando007 wrote:Remember that you can always make casting calls to members here at the CABG for voices. I'm glad you used my IST tank instructions: http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=297982
I love seeing it in other member's MOC's and videos! I hope you choose to accept my offer and make a video with the instructions. Smile
Oh, CC you don't know the story, on YouTube, PizzaMovies said that's his OWN creation. No credit was given. Surprised

Where? He just changed a few things about it.
Where? I said on YouTube!

Woh hold on there dude, I never said it was MINE I said I found instructions on the internet for it. And for a few people I told them where to find it actually.
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Post by Alpha Wed Dec 03, 2008 11:46 pm

The only way the 501st and the 212th are related is because they are in the same Army. However, I'm not sure if "Army" refers to a Systems Army or a Sector Army.
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Post by LegoBoyRobert Wed Dec 03, 2008 11:46 pm

PizzaMovies wrote:
LegoBoyRobert wrote:
Clonecommando007 wrote:
LegoBoyRobert wrote:Okay, that is NOT the 501st. Cody is not in it. Star Corps Troops?!?! They are SO not in the 501st legion. And shock troops?!?! Anyways, I like the battle in there.

Actually, I think the 212th Battalion might be a division in the 501st Legion which might be a division in the 7th Sky Corps...
Oh, really? I have got to get some of my facts straight.... Embarassed

Yep everything he said was true rather complicated...but true. Just go to "wookiepedia" to see for yourself. Smile
Pizza, it's 'wookiee. But, still, Star Corps troops? Roll Eyes Wink
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