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541st Vendetta #8: Casulties

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541st Vendetta #8: Casulties

Post by Sialboats on Sat May 09, 2009 6:53 pm

Okay, wrapping up the Battle of Cuipernam, and paving the way for the introduction of several new characters Wink.

































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Re: 541st Vendetta #8: Casulties

Post by Jedi Joe on Sat May 09, 2009 6:57 pm

Another good comic by Sialboats! The story was great, but the SFX could use work.

The holograms were good, but I didn't like the cropped backrounds, they looked pretty tacky.
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Post by foxrex101 on Sat May 09, 2009 6:59 pm

Wow Sial you have really outdone the amazing effects and plot into this story. I like it how the clones have their arms cut off and all that blood and gory is just so awesome!
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Re: 541st Vendetta #8: Casulties

Post by Sialboats on Sat May 09, 2009 7:00 pm

Jedi Joe wrote:Another good comic by Sialboats! The story was great, but the SFX could use work.

The holograms were good, but I didn't like the cropped backrounds, they looked pretty tacky.

Yeah, I ended up cutting a whole lot out of this comic because of that. I simply haven't quite figured out a good way to expand my battlefield. I'm thinking that some nice olive green towels as "tall grass" could be a possiblity. Like what I did with Chronicles and the "snow" Wink .
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Post by Zepher on Sat May 09, 2009 8:38 pm

Okay. So we've got a huge slew of characters hopping in, and I'm happy. But before we go anyfarther, take a breath and look at who you've got on the table now. look at Merc chick, get her to do something. What about those commando's that attacked the Holonet station. Come back to them. And that ship that was left all alone in orbit? The one that got attacked? What about them? Maybe take one comic away from your current story and look at them for a while. Those different gorups need to be mentioned again.


I really am excited to hear some Jedi mentioned. And another family member seems cool, though his sister has disappeared for the time being.
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Re: 541st Vendetta #8: Casulties

Post by Sialboats on Sat May 09, 2009 9:23 pm

Zepher wrote:Okay. So we've got a huge slew of characters hopping in, and I'm happy. But before we go anyfarther, take a breath and look at who you've got on the table now. look at Merc chick, get her to do something. What about those commando's that attacked the Holonet station. Come back to them. And that ship that was left all alone in orbit? The one that got attacked? What about them? Maybe take one comic away from your current story and look at them for a while. Those different gorups need to be mentioned again.


I really am excited to hear some Jedi mentioned. And another family member seems cool, though his sister has disappeared for the time being.

I'm all planning on it, Zeph. Just gimme time.

Spoiler:
Merc chicng to be in the nex is going to be used to get his sister back in thlot and the Commill be in subsequent comics with Arkaert will be the one to alert the o the attack.

I deleted random parts so that it's not ruined for anyone other than me Razz

Time, Zeph. Just time Wink .
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Post by Zepher on Sun May 10, 2009 1:05 am

NO ONE READ THAT SPOILER!

In fact, I'm removing it. Your comics are too good to be ruined Wink
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Re: 541st Vendetta #8: Casulties

Post by Alpha on Sun May 10, 2009 1:40 am

Zepher, come on, stop being a spoilsport, we know everyone already read the spoiler. Wink

Anyhow, onto the comic.

I advise you don't use a blanket, for then half the MOC gets turned into a non-Lego element, and it derives a bit off the 'Lego factor'. It looks good with the baseplate, even if you have limited pieces (Which I doubt you do. Wink).

Onto the plot, I hope the Equinox bastard and McCulbert make a reappearance, and if that Arkanian civvie is alive by some chance, maybe a reintroduction (Memory loss, brain damage, whatever). Your battle scenes were quite good, but not as much SFX.

Oh, and you should obtain some more figs for your Equinox forces, they'd look badass in combat with the CIS and 541st.

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Post by Gerrard on Sun May 10, 2009 3:03 am

Once again, great job Sial. Special effects are great, action and plot-line are great, good job. Smile
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Re: 541st Vendetta #8: Casulties

Post by The Jinja Ninja on Sun May 10, 2009 6:27 pm

Hoi, I thought you were going to include
Spoiler:
Turaki's flashback
in this episode? Also, I don't appreciate you dissin' my generals. Wink Oh, and you spelt 'casualties' wrong.
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Re: 541st Vendetta #8: Casulties

Post by Sialboats on Sun May 10, 2009 9:55 pm

@ Jinja:
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No, that's in the next one Jinja. After Turaki's brother arrives.

@ Alphie: Well, if Zeph gets my expert chat out, I've got this wonderful picture in there of my current piece pool Wink . You'd be suprised what I pull from and still maintain some origionality. I wish I could make more Equinox (if I had the pieces, there'd be more), but for now they will remain a leet commando force Razz !
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