Venator
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Gerrard
Commander Mongoose
Rook
Phazezorz
Cyrus
RubbahBand
A
Knight
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Venator
Hi everyone. This is my first post as a guild member. It is by far my best moc yet the venator! It is 4ft long, and it took five and a half months to finish. In those five and a half months was the planning, version 1 (version 1 was a fail ), and version 2. I will work on it over time, like making better engines,and the bridge, ect...
Link to more pics.
C@C are welcome.
Link to more pics.
C@C are welcome.
Knight- VIP Former Staff
- Location : Anywhere with lego.
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You know Rook is doing a project like this, you beat him to the punch . Anyway the bridge tower could use work.
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Amazing simply amazing! Your venator looks pretty good although the random pieces on the sides don't really stand out to me. Also welcome to the guild!
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Very cool! I admire the greebels on the side! Congratulations on the guild.
Cyrus- Guild Member
- Location : In a barrel of toxic waste
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Thanks everyone. I know the bridge could be better. I do plan on working on it soon.
Knight- VIP Former Staff
- Location : Anywhere with lego.
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I'm not liking the bridge, the sides, and some of the odd white color along the sides. I do appreciate the scale of this, but it just kinda looks off to me.
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Dude, I'm speechless. Honestly, this is amazing. I thinks its a little flat, but hey I got past that and saw the awesomeness.
Commander Mongoose- Guild Member
- Age : 29
Location : Pennsyvania
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Phazezorz wrote:I'm not liking the bridge, the sides, and some of the odd white color along the sides. I do appreciate the scale of this, but it just kinda looks off to me.
The white is just the frame. I used any beams left to cover it up. The other reason it is all white is because this is made of three isd's, some clone bp's, and some spare parts in bins.
@ Rook thanks.
Knight- VIP Former Staff
- Location : Anywhere with lego.
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Yes, but it looks off. And the end wings are extending farther than the side plates, leaving an unhealthy gap.501st Commando wrote:Phazezorz wrote:I'm not liking the bridge, the sides, and some of the odd white color along the sides. I do appreciate the scale of this, but it just kinda looks off to me.
The white is just the frame. I used any beams left to cover it up. The other reason it is all white is because this is made of three isd's, some clone bp's, and some spare parts in bins.
@ Rook thanks.
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Phazezorz wrote:Yes, but it looks off. And the end wings are extending farther than the side plates, leaving an unhealthy gap.501st Commando wrote:Phazezorz wrote:I'm not liking the bridge, the sides, and some of the odd white color along the sides. I do appreciate the scale of this, but it just kinda looks off to me.
The white is just the frame. I used any beams left to cover it up. The other reason it is all white is because this is made of three isd's, some clone bp's, and some spare parts in bins.
@ Rook thanks.
I know the gap is big, but it is how the plates come down. In version 1 the plates came up, so it closed all the gaps, but it broke all the time. Either way I will try to fix that also.
Knight- VIP Former Staff
- Location : Anywhere with lego.
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Here are just some of my comments.
1. There are just too little greebles. It was probably hard since it was so high, but still try to get more.
2. The whole thing is just a bit to high and thick, make it thinner so you don't have to spread the greebles out.
3. The bridge just looks a bit awkward, try getting it a bit shorter and a bit more detailed.
Other than that this thing is amazing! Very nice first post as a guidlie, well done!
1. There are just too little greebles. It was probably hard since it was so high, but still try to get more.
2. The whole thing is just a bit to high and thick, make it thinner so you don't have to spread the greebles out.
3. The bridge just looks a bit awkward, try getting it a bit shorter and a bit more detailed.
Other than that this thing is amazing! Very nice first post as a guidlie, well done!
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That's one large guild entry!
Size aside, the MOC is pretty decent. It's a bit too thick, and like others have said the bridge needs work.
Size aside, the MOC is pretty decent. It's a bit too thick, and like others have said the bridge needs work.
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Thanks Gerrard, and TB. I already lowered the height before, (It was twice as high when it was a wip.) so I don't think I will again. Overall thanks for the comments.
Knight- VIP Former Staff
- Location : Anywhere with lego.
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Wow that looks awesome 501st Commando, it has great greebling and detail on it, like others said though the bridge is a little weird, the side seems too greebled, and the turbolasers seem a little small(I don't think anyone has said that yet), but its still looks amazing, also congrats on getting in the guild.
Commander Vulcan- Guild Member
- Age : 29
Location : Peoria, Arizona
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First of all, welcome to the guild! Now for the Venator. The size and shape is pretty good, although I must agree that the bridge could use some work. Also, I don't really like the greebles on the side as they are put on a bit too randomly. If the other side looked exactly the same, it would look okay though. Do both sides look exactly the same?
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Troopa Daisy wrote:Do both sides look exactly the same?
Some parts yes, and some parts no. Most of the spots are random , besides the corners.
Knight- VIP Former Staff
- Location : Anywhere with lego.
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You could work on the bridge, and it is flat. Over all its really good though.
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