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Post by Knight Fri Feb 12, 2010 10:33 pm

Well it's done, so here is the finished version of the 80th legion's order 66.

Main pic.
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Some clones, and the AT-RT.
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The CPW.
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Zar Vin fighting for his life.
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A clone at his outpost.
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The wookie tower.
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The wookies attacking.
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The water.
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The rocks.
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The inside of the cave is a small droid mining post.
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The minerals.
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The top can come off.
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Some shots without the figs.
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AT-SP

Some shots of the AT-SP.
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AT-RT

Main pic.
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The new legs.
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The side of the head.
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The front and back.
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Another veiw of the new legs.
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CPW

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Another shot.
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The front.
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The back.
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The side.
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The interior.
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Broken down into sub-sections.
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Enjoy! Smile
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Post by Aerial Trooper Nitro Fri Feb 12, 2010 11:05 pm

I really like the settting, is it on Kasshykk?
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Post by Green Tee Fri Feb 12, 2010 11:09 pm

The water is still missing a lot. You can't concentrate detail in one spot, and leave the rest flat, and un-greebled. It makes for a mediocre-at-best MOC, and it detracts from what greatness there is in the MOC. Gun fire with water spraying up and dead or destroyed bodies will make this MOC a real killer.
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Post by Darth Dan Fri Feb 12, 2010 11:33 pm

It is good. I like the use of wet and dry sand as different colors.
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Post by Troopa Daisy Fri Feb 12, 2010 11:49 pm

Looks really good, my only complaint is the area near the water and the water is just way too empty. Wink
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Post by CloneCommanderChaz Sat Feb 13, 2010 12:19 am

I know it must sound like a broken record, but the water is lacking. Along with what the others have said I might recommend some rocks sticking out of the water and on the shore. Also you could possibly add some debris on the beach from the tree and maybe a downed walker.
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Post by moosacow Sat Feb 13, 2010 12:42 am

darn U! That thing is amazing. You win!
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Post by Knight Sat Feb 13, 2010 1:17 am

Well it has been scrapped for parts already, so no point in fixing the water. If it was still built though I would just keep the water as it is, because I've spent more time on the project as planned. I have had ideas for other MOC's that I couldn't do, so I needed the parts ASAP. Overall thanks for the comments everyone. Smile
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Post by bl*c Sat Feb 13, 2010 1:41 am

Scrapped, already? Sad

It gets two thumbs up anyway! Thumbs up Thumbs up
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Post by Knight Sat Feb 13, 2010 2:37 am

bl*c wrote:Scrapped, already? Sad

It gets two thumbs up anyway! Thumbs up Thumbs up

Yep, I needed the slopes, and most of the parts from the walkers for my current projects.
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Post by MarkCreationsInc Sat Feb 13, 2010 9:32 am

That's pretty awesome I'd say just some advice next time maybe a downed droid or wookie vehicle on fire, at least 1 more tree, and finally something flying V-Wing, Droid Tri-Fighter, Vulture Droid, etc. Kashyyyk Camo Kashyyyk
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Post by mhankewycz Sat Feb 13, 2010 1:32 pm

MarkCreationsInc wrote:That's pretty awesome I'd say just some advice next time maybe a downed droid or wookie vehicle on fire, at least 1 more tree, and finally something flying V-Wing, Droid Tri-Fighter, Vulture Droid, etc. Kashyyyk Camo Kashyyyk
I believe they have already destroyed all of the droids is the area.
Anyways, I like it, but I'm with Daisy. You should put some type of ship in the water that has been destroyed, such as a hyena droid bomber. Also, you should put a couple of grass pieces in the sand.
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Post by Commando 45 Mon Feb 15, 2010 2:40 am

I think it's really cool. I like the clones chasing the general.
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Post by comander joey Mon Feb 15, 2010 5:33 pm

Looking good! Smile Nice AR - RT, it looks awsome! Laughing
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Post by Knight Mon Feb 15, 2010 5:50 pm

Thanks for the comments everyone. Smile
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Post by eclipsegrafx Mon Feb 15, 2010 10:50 pm

A little sad to see it end the way it did. I was hoping you would have put that wookie vehicle in the water.

It is still great though.
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Post by Cyrus Wed Feb 17, 2010 12:30 pm

It's all very nice, but the water could of been changed simply! Instead of them laying down, you could of put them on there 1x1 side facing towards you or away from you and put another one in the open spot! And do that many more times. Now, the Wookie tower looked good although you could see the under color. Wink The scatered droid part were nice, but one full droid with a spear in it's back would of been more like real war, cause the wookie could of hit one of the droids. The clone in his small "outpost" could of been seen because the wookies could of looked over and saw him and started attacking him. Other than those fix able things, it's great! Smile
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Post by Eatingasandwich Thu Feb 18, 2010 10:57 pm

very nice. Have to admit this is by far the best MOC I have ever seen. Great job. The wookies seem a little crowded at the top but other than that it is great.
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Post by C-Valkyrie Sat Apr 03, 2010 11:58 pm

Hm, this is interesting. I like the Kashyyyk scene, however there could be explosions, maybe cotton balls might help. The rocky area is pretty tight, especially the tree fort. (Is that what it's called xD) The vehicles could have more colorful pieces and more of a smooth finish. Maybe a fair fight like wookie attaching explosives to an Corporate Aliianced Tank Droid may spice a few things up. Heh, you gave me ideas on how to make a nature-related scene, nice job! 4.5/5

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